love it!

Roy!Angst. Got to love it.

That was a great story, I was hoping Ed would have been found but that wouldn't of worked right for this particular story. Good sequel opportunity though! excellent story

Oh how I liked this fic. The right amount of guilt, lust, and romance. :3 Although.. what ever happened to Roy's date? lol well, a good story nonetheless. :D

I still really, really, really love this. Just so you know.

I decided, since I'm home early and looking for something fun, I'm going to reread this.

I really need to find more things to do that are fun. *laugh*

Anyway, the opening is very good and sets the tone for everything that comes after. We meet two "key" new players - Riza's David and Roy's Mara - and they're inserted in the story with little fuss and no big deal is made over them, rather than the "OMG, LOOKIT MY O.C.!"

I really, really enjoyed this! I loved how in-character everyone was. I could imagine Roy gaining wisdom this way, through these circumstances. And I loved how he talked - humorous, self-deprecating, yet authoritative when he needed to be. All of it seems so, well, Roy, as he would likely have been at this point in his life. Very well done.

"Any reason you chose Garmen instead of Gruuman though?"

Actually, it's Grumman. Like Havoc and Mustang, it's another military aircraft pun; the Grumman Aerospace Corp. was the company that made the E-2 Hawkeye. Clever, no?

As wonderful as ever and an interesting twist on a well-worn theme.

Amazed as always ! Reading this even makes me tolerate a bit more of the movie, just so i can pretend it's the end i wanted !

i loved, congratulations

Love it as usual!

Heh, sweet, delicious angst. Any reason you chose Garmen instead of Gruuman though?