 WarFlower 5/17/12 . chapter 24"Problem? There is no problem! With every drop of life, my power grows!" he growled in a voice far more than human. "I feel glorious! Someone throw a pickle at me!"
Sasuke's half eaten pickle bounced off his face.
Geez! this was a great chapter. like the rest. |
 WarFlower 5/15/12 . chapter 20OMFG! This was awesome dude! Funny Omake too. |
 WarFlower 5/9/12 . chapter 18WOW you are a GOD. i can't help but want to follow your every comand |
 WarFlower 5/2/12 . chapter 15"Hey, sorry I didn't make the run this morning," Naruto said, yawning slightly. "I had a late night meeting with Hinata's father and a few Hyuga guards about how my explosions of youth will not be happening in her bedroom late at night. All things considered, you could say I was feeling sort of beat this morning."
HAHHAHAHHAHAHHAHHA! this is hilarious! I can't get enough of you Nugar! |
 WarFlower 4/27/12 . chapter 14"Arson? Cool!" Naruto said enthusiastically.
"I like fire," Sasuke admitted.
"Konoha shall burn," Hinata added quietly.
You are a genious. I rather enjoy your chapters. they are a nice length too. |
 WarFlower 4/24/12 . chapter 10"Except, ah, twice now, I've had this really weird dream where I was wearing these sort of sun god robes on a pyramid surrounded by a thousand naked women screaming and throwing little pickles at me."
Hahahahhahah
you are a genious Nugar! Truley. I'm in love again. |
 WarFlower 4/24/12 . chapter 7oh fucking goodness. this shit is amazing. i can't turn away |
 WarFlower 4/23/12 . chapter 2This is awesome. There is potential here. I'm gunna have to read the rest to be saticfied. It's nice work. |
 random 4/22/12 . chapter 10 All right, I've read and reread this story a few times (it was so good that I didn't bother with leaving reviews because I was so eager to get to the next chapter) but really-
What happened on the C-rank? It's still really, REALLY confusing!
And Midori...Did Sasuke fall in love with her, because the story suggests more than just a crush, and...well. It's really vague and I sure hope you explain it. And the pickles...was that random or intentional? |
 dkjudsjud 4/13/12 . chapter 5 I hate the way naruot treats hinata. I hope he treats her better or ill probably quit the story |
 zack 4/12/12 . chapter 23 i love the kakashi at the end... that is totally something he would do i laughed sooo hard at the end when he said he read porn lollol |
 Lord Xantos A. Fowl 4/5/12 . chapter 33note this meant to review for ch 34 but i've already done so
really stoaked
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really stoaked and 2 years hun
anyway good story |
 Lord Xantos A. Fowl 4/5/12 . chapter 9hmm spot the lie spot the lie hmm where is the junction of truth and lie hmm
not sure on 1, i believe the discusion with ikibi is truth, he may be lieing about either the stealing or the ush, both have reasons that seam to contridict each other,
the only noncontradictory thing i could get from that, given that there is a lie is that
a he does steel but he tries not to and but he sometimes does anyway, and either it gives him a rush every time or he was referring to a different time altogether
b he stole before ikibi talked
2 don't know on two, in my math class (chat state community collage Calculus) when a problem has too many possible solutions it is treated as having no solution, this one is like that
3 see 2 but more so
4 possibly she wants to hate her family and she wants naruto to see that but is incapable of doing so? otherwise i don't know
5 see 3
6 see 2
7's got several possible junctures, all of them similar and rather shallow, steming from her not being as devoted as she thinks she is
8 again dissapointed in myself for not knowing, given Ino is the one talking... hmmm... i don't know 3 possibilities and each are unlikely
9 possibly she is flattered in beeing fought over, possibly the real reason she resents it is that she dosn't want to be left behind
10 love the refference to HHGTTG but other than that i don't know
11 hmmm maybe a partial truth on Lee's part like maybe he;s wearing two kinds of underwhere but then gai's saying it... hmm maybe he's lieing about someone lieing? but hmm... i'm going to go with lee or Neji
12 don't know but i find the initial statement to be false, the event in question is probably how it happened perhaps the first oppurtunity but naruto killed at a guess
13 don't know really i could guess but not with any real confidence of evidence
14 i think he gets them to signify important events
15 don't know other than i believe that kakashi does respect Gai
16 no clue... it doesn't really fit except possibly due to the time frame him not having that much belief in the kid and wanted to chear him up
17 the once part maybe
18 could be almost all a lie but unlikely, posssibly shikamaro was more than privy maybe he helped kill it
19 incest, sister IS the mom, that was a fun thought
20 i think he tries but is still human |
 Yakurenazea 3/19/12 . chapter 34Let me put it to you straight...This is...Absolutely...One of the best...Naruto Stories...On the interwebs. This looks like it should actually replace Naruto the manga. This looks like it could BE it's own manga. This totally diverges from the actual plot of naruto and follows its own. That is already hard to do. The fact you do it so well, is nothing short of amazing. But the question I have right now...Is this story dead? I really hope not, it's a fabulously done story, especially with all the humor Team Lie throws around, I can't tell you how many times I've almost died laughing (Especially with Sasuke's "Proceed" with Naruko and Hinata, and even his "My Hair Is A Bird, Your Argument Is Invalid (Awesome place for a meme to be in this story)")I can understand if you're having problems writing, just...Please do not discontinue this story...There are many a great story like this that end up getting discontinued, and I really don't want to see another one go down.
TL;DR, This story's fuckin' awesome, don't discontinue it. |
 Kurai Ummei 2/21/12 . chapter 22I wish there was 'thumbs up' button, for when we don't know what to say to your insane ramblings, but truly enjoyed them nonetheless. |