 PokemonNinja2 2009-06-24 . chapter 1This story was amazingly touching. The way you incoporated historical events and politcal views while remaining reltaively unoffensive and unbiased was amazing. You're a great writer. |
 tearthgrrl 2008-11-20 . chapter 1...Three words: FAN-FREAKING-TASTIC! I could totally see this happening (or segments like it happening) in an actual episode! :D
I like American Dad (better than Family Guy) but I've never liked Haley (at all :P) although this fic was pretty great. Everybody was in-character and the plot itself is enough to pique any Am Dad fan. People should write more fics on this category...
Well, again awesome fic. Really, I mean it. Look at my profile if possible! :)
Yours and Truly,
-Tearthgrrl |
 katielight 2008-11-12 . chapter 1OMG FABULOUS and i dont say that lightly, I know im gonna read this over and over. Not only did you capture the characters persona's prefectly, u also added your own scenarios to the story of hayleys past, at the same time mixing events from actual episodes, u are a true american dad fan and an awesome fan fic writer
BEST AD FIC ON THE SITE
PLEASE WRITE MORE, OH MAYBE UR NEXT ONE COULD BE ABOUT ROGER LOLZ |
 redastra2000 2008-06-30 . chapter 1a sad story. but worth it. well done. |
 Rock Raider 2008-06-24 . chapter 1So, that was what started the destruction of Hayley's relationship with Stan. What a sordid past they had. To think Hayley took it so ** herself for the Camp Refoogee thing. I personally don't agree with Stan's beliefs myself. Yeah, I'm a left-wing, so what? Perhaps this may be a sign that Stan & Hayley's relationship, for the most part, is getting better. Sure there may still be some friction, considering the fact that they're on opposing wings, but still, yeah. Well, anyway, see ya. |
 lia200304 2008-03-24 . chapter 1interesting story. very interesting. I liked the ending. it was so like american dad. good work...is there gonna be another chapter? |
 Jigsaw'sArrancar 2008-03-23 . chapter 1 you seen to be good at writing stan/haley centrics, please write some more of those |
 Warlord-Xana 2008-01-16 . chapter 1pretty good, ccan Roger appear in your next story. |
 Freebird87 2007-12-18 . chapter 1That's a good story. |
 Rosie-are-blue 2007-09-06 . chapter 1Fantastic! I really loved it! I loved how you mixed the real show up with your own writing. It's a dramatic part of american dad that would never be seen on the actual show.
I hope you write more. |