This story was amazingly touching. The way you incoporated historical events and politcal views while remaining reltaively unoffensive and unbiased was amazing. You're a great writer.

...Three words: FAN-FREAKING-TASTIC! I could totally see this happening (or segments like it happening) in an actual episode! :D

I like American Dad (better than Family Guy) but I've never liked Haley (at all :P) although this fic was pretty great. Everybody was in-character and the plot itself is enough to pique any Am Dad fan. People should write more fics on this category...

Well, again awesome fic. Really, I mean it. Look at my profile if possible! :)

Yours and Truly,
-Tearthgrrl

OMG FABULOUS and i dont say that lightly, I know im gonna read this over and over. Not only did you capture the characters persona's prefectly, u also added your own scenarios to the story of hayleys past, at the same time mixing events from actual episodes, u are a true american dad fan and an awesome fan fic writer

BEST AD FIC ON THE SITE

PLEASE WRITE MORE, OH MAYBE UR NEXT ONE COULD BE ABOUT ROGER LOLZ

a sad story. but worth it. well done.

So, that was what started the destruction of Hayley's relationship with Stan. What a sordid past they had. To think Hayley took it so ** herself for the Camp Refoogee thing. I personally don't agree with Stan's beliefs myself. Yeah, I'm a left-wing, so what? Perhaps this may be a sign that Stan & Hayley's relationship, for the most part, is getting better. Sure there may still be some friction, considering the fact that they're on opposing wings, but still, yeah. Well, anyway, see ya.

interesting story. very interesting. I liked the ending. it was so like american dad. good work...is there gonna be another chapter?

you seen to be good at writing stan/haley centrics, please write some more of those

pretty good, ccan Roger appear in your next story.

That's a good story.

Fantastic! I really loved it! I loved how you mixed the real show up with your own writing. It's a dramatic part of american dad that would never be seen on the actual show.

I hope you write more.