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Reviews For: Monopoly

Luckybrat452-494
2008-08-01
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abuse"“You know, it’s not real money, Greg,” pointed out Sara, gulping the last dregs of her now warm coke.

“Yeah and neither are gambling chips…” said Greg.

“The man’s got a point,” Catherin pointed out." aminingly my fav funny line i love the story its fabO! (dont ask my twins maddness is rubbing off!)
Grand Puba of All The Smurf...
2008-02-27
ch 1,
abuseHAHAHAHA! Your funny!
CSIGranger7
2007-08-25
ch 1,
abuseHA ha! I love Greg. I play monopoly with my friends and I ALWAYS lose! Anyway, good story. Cute and fluffy--nothing too serious.
Pip4
2007-08-25
ch 1,
abuseThis is a cute story. But you switched Greg out for Nick and then back again halfway through. Just thought you should know.
Kayla-Louise
2007-08-25
ch 1,
abusegood story please continue to write the majority of people are nice on here, some are not but just take their critisum (always have problems with spelling that) with a pinch of salt and you will do just fine.

Kayla-Louise
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