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| Luckybrat452-494 2008-08-01 ch 1, | abuse"“You know, it’s not real money, Greg,” pointed out Sara, gulping the last dregs of her now warm coke. “Yeah and neither are gambling chips…” said Greg. “The man’s got a point,” Catherin pointed out." aminingly my fav funny line i love the story its fabO! (dont ask my twins maddness is rubbing off!) |
| Grand Puba of All The Smurf... 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHAHA! Your funny! |
| CSIGranger7 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abuseHA ha! I love Greg. I play monopoly with my friends and I ALWAYS lose! Anyway, good story. Cute and fluffy--nothing too serious. |
| Pip4 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is a cute story. But you switched Greg out for Nick and then back again halfway through. Just thought you should know. |
| Kayla-Louise 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abusegood story please continue to write the majority of people are nice on here, some are not but just take their critisum (always have problems with spelling that) with a pinch of salt and you will do just fine. Kayla-Louise |