Wow even tho that is outdated it's still good. If Pokemon were more of a teenager series instead of a little kids series then that would make a good episode.

wah! you hafta make a sequel! if you do, make Ash and Misty boyfriend/girlfriend, please!
Thanks! Ja ne!
-Bria

Haha, funny! ^-^ Good job, keep up the good work.

*Laughs* Great Ending! True form there! *laughs* Hope you write another similar to this one! Have a Great New Year!

Nice story. A few AAML hints and a cute story.

You shouldn't have had thing go COMPLETELY back to the way they were before, after all, the whole point of a story is for something to change.
I just realized, what was Misty going to DO with her pokemon? Just let them rot in their poke balls or what? Anyway, it's nice to see the dragon has her convidence back.

Yay! Finally! That was so good but you can't end here! You must do a sequel!! You must!!! One where Ash and Misty get together. ^_^ This is a great story. I love it! Hope to read more from you!

heeheeheeheeheeheehee!! That's funny! ^.^ cool!

no!!!!!!!! Togepi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >.

Ash!!! You're an idiot!!!!

^.^

lalalalalalala..... what are they planning? ^-^

how did she get there so fast?????

naka? what was on the wall?

@_@ Sorry Enja...I took you little poem thing without even noticing!
Yikes -sorry 'bout that! ^^;;;;

~ Satokasu Suki