|Reviews for Innocentia Disperitum|
| Guest 1/16/13 . chapter 1
| Hermyone94 8/15/11 . chapter 1
The story was really great! It made me laugh and cry, the end was soo sad!
| shiney02 8/2/11 . chapter 1
I can only say what I wrote about your other story: So sad and beautiful it hurts even more.
I'm glad you have so much stories (even if they are mostly one-shots, I'd LOVE to read a longer one of yours).
| modestlobster 6/30/11 . chapter 1
Great writing; the whole last paragraph is fantastic. (In a sad sort of way, but still.)
| IwishIwasASlytherin 6/15/10 . chapter 1
This is amazing! I was a complete mess after the last line, beautiful indeed. Gret job at humanizing Bill's character...
| LittleWeasleyGirl- Kate Castle 10/25/09 . chapter 1
really good story, I think! Good idea to tell it from Bill's point of view since he is, in fact, the twins oldest brother and defenitly saw them growing up. Quite touching )
| xpOplAmAgiCaLpOnyx 4/13/09 . chapter 1
OMG I'm crying!
| FrednGeorgeFanGirl 10/3/08 . chapter 1
| lyin 2/17/08 . chapter 1
such a fabulous character capture of bill looking at the twins- and it feels so true emotionally, his reactions to leaving and returning and that they're his 'kid brothers'- leading up to the really heart-wrenching last paragraph- fred on the 'cusp of everything' and that he can't patch it up like a cut or scrape... poor bill. poor george. poor fred. :( great writing!
| Equal Opportunity Candy Eater 12/31/07 . chapter 1
This is so sweet. I just *love* Bill and the twins.
| laneykin 11/11/07 . chapter 1
wow that was sad. Really brought tears to my eyes.
| HPFanFictionFan 11/5/07 . chapter 1
Great fic! Fantastic! Really well written. Love Bill in this. And the twins, of course! So in character! Thank you very much for sharing!
| Poppy P 10/14/07 . chapter 1
That was lovely. It makes sense that Bill became a prefect after being responsible for all of those siblings. I can see where Fred's death would be the end of innocense for George. They are laughter and light and how can that continue without one of them? Again, a great read.
| Hot Tea Addict 10/4/07 . chapter 1
oh wow. that was so sad. I liked it though. I loved Fred, he was my third in line, just after Bill. Draco will always be first. You are amazing.
| ncis-lady 9/18/07 . chapter 1
Oh I have tears in my eyes right now... that was really good!