O. This is mucho sweet. ^^ Nobody seems too sue-ish, but I'd watch it with Charlie. She's okay to start out with...but be careful.

All in all, this seems pretty schveet. Good descriptions of the original characters and everything. Keep up the good work!

~~moi~~

Well don't be mad at me any more cause here is your big fat review. M'kay. I really liked it, it's not blurpy. I liked wat you did with the charitars (how do you spell charictors) they are really well formed. The language and accents are really easy to understand, and you fall into what they are saying. but why are they called Shiners cause they get in fights alot and get shiners or cause they are all shiny and pretty since they wash C:? Explain please? Update please!