It's probably way too late but I really wish you could update this. It's amazing.

Fascinating.

Mademise Morte

Brilliant. Wish you would update! :)

I... I... I'm at an utter loss for words. And that can't happen...

Now, as much as I like the somewhat evil and twisted way this is written (hey, if you didn't want it that way, sorry, but that's how I saw it) the coupling is not all right with me.

I guess that does in fact make me a flamer.

As much as you have your own opinions, this couple does not work well with me. Sorry, but it's the truth. Ryan and Gabriella? Now that makes me wanna take a long s.h.i.t in my pants.

Now, I swear that you will be the only, THE ONLY author I will say something nice to. Because I don't want to discriminate too much.

Your story line was good. I liked how you split it up and gave a small description. I hate long a.s.s stories. So this sits well with me. Only problem with it is the whole Ryan/Gabriella coupling.

*barfs*

But hey, it is your opinion. I'll give you that much. And now I must leave you, before I drown in the sweetness I'm displaying.

*barfs again*

H/S Flamer

Ok, first off. Totally like when you list ALL the sins for each character. Not only does it make the chapter longer (YES! Who doesn't love to curl up with a long update?) but it gives the character more layers. It basically reinforces the whole "we are not all good or all evil". You can delve deeper into each person and present them in a light we never even thought to put them in. But whatever works for you.

Ryan...Ryan...Ryan. I could see his greed for parental attention because it does seem like Sharpay is the star of the family. But the fact that he pushed her out of the tree house So calmly and then preceded to gain sympathy from her injury chills me. I mean, even if Sharpay is a spaz, she is his sister and I would expect him to have some empathy for her. Boy, was I wrong.

Ryan and Gabby together, though, does not phase me. I could see them both being the most disturbed out of all the Wildcats. And then to join them together just shouts all kinds of wrong. Kind of like a bad accident. You want to look away from the guts and carnage but you can't. Those two make me feel dirty...but in a good way.

I can't tell you how excited I was to see that you had updated this story. I can't wait for the next one. It's Troy, right? Wow. I have a feeling he is gonna be a doozy. I am literally counting the days until the next chapter. Keep it up, pretty please!

omg, you wrote another chapter! thank goodness.

i like when you did all the sins at once. it made sense and i wish you woudl go back to doing that. but yea great job update update update lol

Wow.

Ryan has a lot of problems.

But AWESOME job!

I didn't think all the sins together was hard to read, I kinda liked being able to read them all at once and it made sense with the title.

But, I'm still loving this fic! So I really can't wait for the update for the rest of Ryan!

(The greed sin kind of shocked me, but in a good way! I wasn't expecting that! And I loved how he hated cursing, except when in bed with Gabs lol)

holy crap, that was good. you should do more characters. definitely.

Hey Everyone!- I can't figure out how to add authors notes so i'm just going to put it on the review boards.

First Off- Many hugs and kisses to all those who reviewed and added this story to thier favorites lists- notably StillThereForMe and MeridianDreams for giving fantasticly long reviews and grasping the story's finer points deeper I thought anyone capable off. Thanks to all reviewers for making me feel good with your words of praise and encouragement.

Second Off- Seven Deadly Sins is currently on hiatus while I finish Ryan's chapter and finish a dance recital.

Third Off- I'm very and most sincerely sorry but these chapters can take up to two weeks to complete and take an obsence amount of planning. For Kelsi's- the last chapter- release date, we're looking at around Christmastime.

Fourth Off- Some of the following chapters will be quite frank about sex, esspecially Kelsi's so I advise anyone under the age of twelve to brace themselves before reading.

Fifth Off- Just to clear some sexuality-realated things up- Ryan is straight or bi ( haven't decided), Both Sharpay and Kelsi are bisexuals and Taylors a lesbian. Everyone is the same age as they are in the movie and I hate fluff so If you're looking for stuff like that, exit out of this fic and go find a nice Zanessa/Troyella fairy-tale to read.

Sixth Off- This fic is DARK and will become even darker in following chapters. There is abuse, rape and prostitutionism. If you don't like that sort of stuff, don't clutter my review board with flames and go find a nicer fic to read. I love constructive critisism more than life itself but I find flames unnessecary and hurtful.

Seventh Off- Ryan's chapter is next, followed by Troy or Taylor's. The tagline for Ryan's chapter is "I Have A Dark Alley and a Bad Idea That Says You Should Keep Your Mouth Shut." Most of the taglines for the fics will be FOB song titles or just quotes that I like.

Thanks agian to all who reviewed and look out for Ryan's chapter in a week or so! Thanks!

What an author doesn't know could fill a book

Gema227

WOW! WOW! WOW!

That is all I can say. Talk about originality to the fullest. I LOVED THIS! I cannot wait to see who you do a character study on next.

I especially like how this was written in kind of a Twilight Zone pentameter. I could just see a kempt spooky man narrating each word to this story and a cryptic score plays in the background as a montage of Gabby in various scenes flashes across the screen, each ending with a evil sneer or malicious glare from her. Aww man, now I really want to see this made into a movie. Oh well, it will just have to play in my mind.

PLEASE continue with this. I am now marking this as a favorite story with an alert. I can't wait for the next installment.

OMG, this is amazing. You need to post more of, I'm seriously hooked. You're a really great writer.

Wow, absolutely LOVED it. Adored it. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful job.

Gabriella can give pretty evil looks in both movies, and that just shows she has a pretty dark side to her, and you fleshed it out beautifully.

I especially liked the Ryella bit, which seemed much more incharacter for both of them than the typical unrealistic Love Relationship people put between them. "Friends" with benefits suits them much better (taking Ryan to be straight or bi that is). I loved the line "he tasted like a very surprised, very hot boy".

I also loved the jealousy of Taylor (which was very original, because I've never read that before but quite believable) and the unique hatred of Sharpay. The reasons you have for Gabriella hating her were so different from what you normally read of them but at the same time quite in character too. I'm wondering if Gabbi's envy of Sharpay for having Ryan was supposed to imply some twincest relationship there...? I guess I'll have to wait for Ryan and Sharpay's chapters for a more clear answer to that, but if so, I really liked that little twist too.

All in all: Amazingly done. Wow.

I can't wait to see what you do with the other characters.

Omg, this is like the best stuff I've ever read. Write more!

Very interesting! :D It was nice to see a dark side to Gabriella, instead of the cookie-cutter personality she's got in the movies.

Can't wait to see who's next.

And, also: I'm not really a fan of Ryella, but I didn't really mind it so much here. :D

Great start!