Sounds really intresting. I hope you continue the story.

i love this are you going to update soon or what

o cool story! i like where it going so far! keep up the good work!

NO!NO!NO!NO!
*crys*no...more...cha-chapters?*sob*iya!iyada!iyada nanda!Update PLEASE!PLEASE!ONEGAI!ONEGAI SHIMASU!

WOW I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY AND I LIKE HOW U MADE KARIN HAVE A DAUGHTER WHO REMINDS ME OF ICHIGO AND I WOULD REALLY LIKE IF U UPDATED

wow never even read n-e thing liky uve got talent keep it up, its like the twins of both karin and hitsugaya meeting and acting like them, loves it jus hope yu finish quick.

yonne1104
p.s the thing i love the best is the way yu killed the son but turned him into a shingami, so wat hayoto lives with toshirou and torishiro lives with karin. Loves the twist, i hope the reason karin and toshirou arent together isnt so bad like the story "something more important" (just so yu kno, he left karin cuz hinamori had woke up from the como, sad aint it, got to hate who rote that ^_^

your story seems quite interesting.

pls update ASAP!

keep up ur good work!

nice! plz update soon!

still waiting for chapter2...

that is really good keep up the great work

This story is interesting!
Is the baby girl who survive Torishiro?
Man, I can hardly wait to find out!
Please do update as soon as possible.

oh plplzplzppzlpzlzplzpzlpzlzpzppzlzplzpzlpzlpzzlzzppzpzl updaste!!

Ichi-nii died, didn't he!

This is so good and I hope you update soon. You make things more or less obvious but you keep us hooked.

I like this. Continue soon.