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revilo
2008-04-04
ch 11,
abusehi that was great i will start reading the next one staright away
Taeniaea
2008-03-17
ch 11,
abuseGreat Story!!
DNAngelfanatic07
2008-03-17
ch 11,
abuseNo! I can't wait for the next sequel to come out. I love your stories!
livingINmyDAYDREAMS
2008-03-17
ch 11,
abusegood thing you are making a sequel, because I can't stand it hanging there like that. I have to know what happens, why does Tk want to break up? WHY!? GREAT STORY!
Dai's Angel
2008-03-17
ch 11,
abusegreeat story but im not a big fan of the break up part
x.Who.Dares.Wins.x
2008-03-17
ch 11,
abusehey
thank you for finishing the story!
it was good ^-^
TaKari Girl 101
2008-03-17
ch 11,
abuseEllow Princess!

WHAT! HE WANTS TO BREAK UP! I WILL KICK HIS ** IF HE DOESNT MARRY HER!

Great job on ch10 11!

Keep Writing! I Can't wait for the sequel!

Love Ya Lot's
Ja-ne
Sincerelly
youre beta
TaKari Girl 101
Lord Pata
2008-03-16
ch 11,
abusepretty cool way to end this one, I can't wait to see the sequel ^^

I want to see how Gatomon will start to handle the fact she has feelings for Patamon, she still owes him much for that time she faked she was about to kiss him, she got lucky he only asked for cake at that time as a way for her to amend but I'd say she needs to do it better than that to compensate him XD
Dai's Angel
2008-02-05
ch 9,
abusegreat job i loved it yeah go ahead and write a sequel
livingINmyDAYDREAMS
2008-02-04
ch 9,
abuseI love this story! Please update soon!
Lord Pata
2008-02-03
ch 9,
abuseYay! Kari gained her self confidence again, thanks Wizardmon! ^^

Aw Gatomon blushed a lot when Kari hinted Patamon though it was obvious seeing how she was more worried about Patamon when she saw TK chained on that chair and Patamon on his lap ^^

good thing Wizardmon talked to Kari on time ^^
TaKari Girl 101
2007-12-29
ch 1,
abuseHeyy Look at My ideas and Tell me what ya think!
TaKari Girl 101
2007-12-28
ch 8,
abuseHeyy sweety,
I LOVE IT!
GUESS WHAT!
I HAVE MORE IDEAS!
I still think Kari should get brainwashted and give all her power to the evil digimon(i still cant remamber his name!;P)! ya know Tai and Mimi should hook up! Matt can have Sora(cuz i kinda dont like her mutch! No afence to the Sora fans)! OR... One of the scubamon(i have no idea how to spell it) could like turn into T.K. and make him dump Kari witch makes her really upset and depressed! and then all her friends dump her too! and that makes her even more depressed and sad and then Darkness swalo's her hole and she totally loses her light! Oh and my dear princess its D-3! ;P
You dont have to use my ideas, i just wanted to give em to ya (L)!
Love Ya Lot's
Chimo
Sincerelly
Takari Girl 101
P.S: sorry for the bad spelling!
Dai's Angel
2007-12-26
ch 7,
abusegreat but sad chapter i loved it can't wait for the next one ;)
DNAngelfanatic07
2007-12-24
ch 8,
abuseI can't believe she trusted the Scubamon, and now Tk's gone. I hope they can find Kari in time before the portal opens. Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next!
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