I read this ages ago, and loved it, and somehow never posted a review. It was one of the first shounen-ai stories I ever read, and really changed my mind about the whole idea. It's just so delicate and lovely and in character. Good job!

aw I wish there was more to the story but it was perfect ho w it was .

I liked it. Poor Glen...

I hardly found Vicious/Gren Fics, and it was not so Shounen-Ai ish I thought it would be. (But I like it how it is)
The way you describe the atmosphere is just beautiful, I almost felt the sounds, the smells, and how the two sit in the sand. Awesome!

Okay, when I finished this, I was left with a wrenched heart, kawaii eyes and a need for more. Bravo! I hear applause, and it's all for you.

The last line killed it...

Oh, who am I kidding. This fic can't be killed, it's too damn beautiful. Sure, anything involving Grencia and Vicious is beautiful, but... well, this is extremely well-written and emotional. Mooooore!

Hehe! Just going through all the VXG ficcies. *Cling* Waii This one was so cute!

what a piece of work is a fic, how infinate in possiblities, how profound in beauty...

not to mention that vicious/gren is just beautiful in and of itself.

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i like these. they're great. so beautiful...

Wow again! You are an amazing writer. I love how your stories seem to flow with the character's emotions. The description of the sky, the sand in the wind, the smells and sounds from the men in the camp...It just feels so realistic, as if I am actually there with them, sharing the experience with them. I can picture everything perfectly. It's like watching the show in my head as it is transmitted through your words. Once again, terrific job!

You've really got a writing talent...keep it up! I love all this stuff!

Beautifully written! And with one of my favorite characters (Gren:) I hope you will write more-you give such depth to his character and what he might have felt towards Vicious.

I've only seen about 5 eps of dubbed Bebop, but from the first ep I saw I was ViciousxSpike all the way! Mwah! And then I saw Gren and that became my new thing and I immediately went a-hunting for fics. I really like the ones of yours that I've read so far. Very well written, though rather sad. Sorry, I'm not too good at reviewing.

Excellent story.

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiii... ::cries:: Poor Vicious! Poor Gren! What else to say? Beautifully written with all the details that go along with a fic by raddi. Remember niichan- stargazing. _