that was really good!!what i really hated in the movie was thati)there was noTronjheim in the movie OR Isidar Mithrim, which completely stuffs it up for the nxt movie- if they do 1(ii)arya didnt look rite!! and (i) ajihad dosent die and eragon dosent go 2 ellesmera 4 training!! well, thanks 4 putting up with me :)

yes! a person who knows how to write a movie! the director's version was really bad.

I don't like Eragon, especially the movie, but this was AWESONE! That is SO how it should go!
I think Arya will end up as the next Rider, since the other dragon is green and so is her magic.

Love this!

~Wings~

*stares at the screen open mouthed* Oh...my...GOSH! I WAS LOOKING THROUGH WHAT I REVEIWED AND I WANTED TO READ THIS AGAIN AND SEE IF ANYTHING WAS KNEW. (Oops, sorry, caps was still on) THAT WAS AWESOME!(perposly caped) Wow...that was awesome.

Wow! Good job! Why couldn't the movie be like this?
The movie was actually pathetic compared to the book...I cried because it was so pathetic...but yours is really good! Can't wait til more!

Oops, I thought I had already reviewed this chapter! Once again, well done, I still can't believe the producers didn't call you. If on Caller ID you ever see 'Eldest Movie' pick up the phone, please! lol. Add another scene, please! *I love these*

Hey! Thought I would review something of yours, since you reviewed mine. Anyways- this is really good! That movie definately needed some improvement (personally I reckon your script is better than the actual movie's)
Keep writing!

That was way better! I was alwys confused about Durza's shadow thingy. I don't know how they came up with that.

Dang! I wish it had really happened like that. ^^

yes! i loved it...it was like a movie in my head...O_o...ya, im wierd...good job! *gives you a 10 out of 10*

I definitely think that your version should have been done in the movie. Keep up the good work!

Hey, yeah. They really messed up the movie, didn't they? I could go on for hours about stuff they did wrong. ^^

awsome!keep going!!

are you going to have Eragon actually meet the were-cat? (sorry, cant spell it) and are you gonna do the ride throught the desert? oh, it was awesome!

This is really awesome! Plz continue!