THAT WAS AWESOME!

That was cool. I loved the ending. :) (fav)

Now that, was a real awesome fic!
It was amazing on how you kept them completely serious without them just eating each other alive like some fics do.
I loved it, but I'd love it even more if something more came from it all...
Haha, I LOVED IT!

wow, it was amazing, and it only has 3 (makes that 4) review? jeesh. people are so mean. awesome one shot thingy, by and awesome writer person!

That was a great oneshot. I think it would awsome if you did a sequal or continuation.

Hey,
I liked it, I think it was a Great lemon! Are You going to continue with this story? Or was it a one shot story only?
Take Care,
InuYasha40

Great job, aside from the misspelling of "chakra," but I blame myself for not catching it in the proofreading phase. Other than that, awesome. You did keep them pretty true to character, even though they were doing things that the writers of the show would obviously not have them do, both because of the content and because of their pairing biases. As for the ending, I can only suppose that Raven was in his room for real but that she used her psionic talents to trick Robin into thinking it was a dream afterwards. Anyway, great job and looking forward to more from you.