 GreenCyberWolf 2009-11-05 . chapter 15Please continue with this story, this is too good and you've come too far to leave it at this. I cant wait to find out how Luffy is gonna rescue Nami and what else happens with the fake Luffy. I'm begging now, please update soon. |
 HAzArdrOxS 2009-07-21 . chapter 15Very interesting story just read all chapters hopefully we see an update soon keep up good work |
 rayyasha 2009-07-12 . chapter 15 ok, I know it took me awhile, but I finally reviewing!I already said I love three's a crowd! and I DO!
please keep it up! there's so many questions left,
kita's whip; clone luffy's reaction to nami being happier with real luffy n the nakama; real luffy's reaction to what nami did!
you're such an involved writer, it comes to lift like the manga beautifully! keep up the insperation!! much fan service |
 Akrim 2009-07-10 . chapter 15You monster!
How can you just stop at a place like this?!
First of all, I really like this story and with the last chapters I like it more and more. I must say tha first chapters weren't that interesting, although the very first one was really great!
I like the story anyway.
Poor Nami. And poor Luffy. The both have a real difficult time, Nami's kind of more difficult than his. She has to handle the relationship between her and this clone, he's really weird and I cannot understand why she slept with him. Though she regrets it hardly and I hope Luffy either won't get to know or he forgives her. But he dreamt about it, and I think Nami will tell him. In either way I really hope they handle it and first Luffy finds her at this smiling island.
So, I really hope you go on writing, because it's a great story and very well worth it to continue.
And I wanna see what happens next and how they manage all these things.
Please do all your readers a favour an go on. We wanna know, how it ends
Please, please!! You just have to go on >__< Please!
So, then until, hopefully, next chapter.
bye |
 ano 2009-05-20 . chapter 15 Please finish this. The story is totally awesome. |
 anon 2009-05-20 . chapter 14 This story is awesome. Please finish it. These twists are killing me and I can't wait to see the reunion and ending. |
 Me223 2009-05-12 . chapter 15Wow this is tremendously good, are you ever planning on updating it? Cause it's May now... |
 CandyExpress 2009-03-03 . chapter 15I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVVE IIT!
omg this keep me up all night reading this lol
keep up your good work! cant wait till the next chapter! |
 Squirt223 2009-02-26 . chapter 15 LOL okay I have spent the last week or so reading this story from beginning to end and I have to say that I absolutely love it. I'm a huge fan of One Piece and love the idea of Luffy/Nami even though Oda has no intentions of including official romance between the characters. That's okay, because that's when the fans come forth with their unofficial idea's and dreams of how their favourite characters ought to be, whether it's just for kicks and giggles or more lol, whatever.
Not only was the story entertaining on a number of levels, everyone was actually in character for the most part which I appreciate wholeheartedly. When they aren't IC, it's not believeable. Unless it was written to be like that, it's kind of a waste of time for me. It's nice after sifting through the dozens of fanfics on this site as well as others to finally find a story that can hold my attention. It's awesome!
"Wow that was hot" or close to it was mine and probably everyone's thoughts after reading that lemon. Like, holy crap.
I suppose that out of everything, the idea that grabbed my attention the most though was using sea stone in the form of a bullet that could physically harm devil fruit users instead of simply weakening them. That's something that hasn't shown up in the series to my knowledge anyway. Luffy did seem a little OOC but eh, I didn't mind it. It got me wondering how Oda would have Luffy react if one of the bad guys had this weapon that had the same desired effect of actually being able to pierce him. If not in the form of a bullet, maybe something similar will come up? It's made me curious!
Again, this story is very well done, I hope that you're recovering well from your accident from a couple months ago and am looking forward to your future chapter releases Seltap! |
 See you 2009-02-26 . chapter 15Sugoi Seltap-san! You and your stories are really amazing, especially "Three's Company"! You always manage to keep all main characters IC.
The clone of Luffy you made is so cute and possesive of Nami! I like it! XD Nyahahaha)) Also the plot of the story is very interesting))
Hope you'll update soon)) |
 dalj-pict 2009-02-16 . chapter 12Went and read the lemon. It was great, I almost...well yeah. Anyways great chapter man, I also really like the end. Gonna be great to see how Nami reacts. And over all just an epic entry to a good story. I would personally say this was the best chapter, not just cause of the lemon, but also because it was very well written. So yeah! |
 Raven the Ravenous 2008-12-25 . chapter 15BWAHAHAHAHA~! I has no idea most of what I just read regarding the 'other world' 8] I did love the mention of lesbians 'cept for the incest bit. ~.~; Okay...so I could be lying but Raven shall never admit it! 8D Still, that was the WEIRDEST and most INTERESTING chapter I've ever read out of this fic. XD;
Aww, I'd love to read one with a maze in it. xD But yeah, you're right, people would stop reading once they see it. XP
Ha, so sweet. My mom told me that there's nothing to be afraid of the full moon but to enjoy its beauty in the dark night. :]
"The sky is smiling at us." I like that. :D And Kita wasn't a bit of a bitch as she normally was... Plus the whole hero thing is making me want to nearly compare her to this fighting video game character, May Lee. She dons a red scarf which means she's in "Hero Mode". XD She only blows up the villains. 8D
YOSHA! I CAUGHT UP! X3 Now I can sit patiently by and wait for the next chapter without having to play catch up again. :D |
 Raven the Ravenous 2008-12-25 . chapter 14Whoa...lotsa things in my mind are going outta control after that meeting with Kloon. So he can't make clones of the same people that have already been killed? Guess every power DOES have a limit?
Nami, what have you done? And just WHAT is in that room? O_O; And wtf, panda fish? XD;
Slowest updater? Nah...I'm pretty damn slow myself. At least you update; I just sit at the computer trying to type while getting distracted by...everything. ^^;
The tension is killing me so I must read the next chapter! D8 |
 Raven the Ravenous 2008-12-25 . chapter 13It helped me to play Sogeking's theme when Sogeking appeared, just for the short little while. xD
Lol, Usopp, Usopp, you wish you were the first to figure it out. I think the first to figure it out was either Robin or Sanji. ;P I can't remember.
Dang it, Two-Ten-Jack aka snake guy got away. D: Well, I wonder where the others are and Kita's acting more a bitch than usual. Yeah, ya heard me, she's a bitch. XP But then again, she can't name her own attacks! XD |
 Raven the Ravenous 2008-12-25 . chapter 12True, no one would, not me especially. But Nami SLEPT with Clone Luffy? D8 Oh no, this is NOT good. She's fallen for him already! But with that mention of Arlong...maybe she will be able to remember WHICH Luffy she cares for (and is currently on his way to find her)
Belina was so cute in this one. X3 I could imagine her sucking on her thumb and crushing Clone Luffy's hand. XD |