 P.A.W.07 2008-02-25 . chapter 1A lovely way to connect the comics and story line. i just love that twist at the end. "I didn't pack any markers." |
 ArmoredSoul 2007-12-27 . chapter 1*grins*
Oh goodie!
I love when you have those conundrum dreams that seem to weird to be real, but then you find something that couldn't be without the dream in your surroundings.
It's fun... |
 Captain Lupin Ferus 2007-10-28 . chapter 1I read the comics and thought them hilarious. Cafei has some nice artistic skills. :3 |
 Angel Commando 2007-09-19 . chapter 1Excellent stories! I'll have to give a few cracks here and there at the FF writing contest, ne? Though I'll probably loose because I can never mimick anyone's characters. But I sure can try! I love all of these stories. . . and Ratchet is getting so protective of our little Evy! Thank goodness for Mirage, and how did that Magic Marker get inside of that towel, eh? It was PFM, I swear! |
 Riana1 2007-08-27 . chapter 1Brillant. |
 Lady Tolwen 2007-08-26 . chapter 1OMG, this was PERFECT! Oh, it'd be so nice for Evelyn to have another human companion, crazy though she may be. Oh, I can just think of poor Ratchet, having to deal with a crazy teenager on top of trying to keep Evey alive and well. Cue the hilarious mental images! xD |
 Cittygurl 2007-08-26 . chapter 1LOL..i thought this was a good story...u should make another chapter...i saw the artwork and i though that it was amazing! |
 Artemis-chan of Redwing 2007-08-26 . chapter 1Oh my goodness! I love it! Evelyn's slowly going crazy, you know. ^_^ And it's awesomely fun, especially having read the fancomics. Her explanations to Ratchet are hilarious!
Artemis-chan |
 Lnzy1 2007-08-26 . chapter 1AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!
That's funny! |
 Okami-chan 2007-08-26 . chapter 1This could have so easily have fallen under The Care and Feeding of Humans as a sleep chapter. Poor Prowl can't even be there to defend himself. XD This is great. |
 Demon's Rose 2007-08-25 . chapter 1Oh, this is absolutely wonderful. Cafei is such a great artist on dA, and this is so wonderfully written. I love how Ratchet is so curious at listening to Evelyn tell about her dreams, and Sideswipe is just confused.
Do they even have paper on the Metellus?
I can't wait for the next chapter on Juxaposition!! |
 Kiashi Goldbeak 501 2007-08-25 . chapter 1The marker?...Oh no! She's real! Everybody run!
I love those short comics. Mostly the shoe one. Can't believe Torque got it, haha! I also love Juxtaposition, I'm forcing my brother to read it.
I hope the next chapters of the main story and 'On the Care and Feeding of Humans' will come soon.
-Ka |
 Cafei 2007-08-25 . chapter 1**Glomp!!**
I feel so luffed! :D
And now since it has been mentioned, I wish to screw with Prowl. **Evil impish grin** |
 Conna Stevenson 2007-08-25 . chapter 1::mad giggling:: Those comics were hysterical. This Cafei person deserves to win an Internets. And so do you, with this side-fic. Thanks for the giggle. |
 Anonymous 2007-08-25 . chapter 1 LOL, this is just as funny as your other fics, especially since I read the comics and knew exactly what was going on. I had to re-read them after this just for more giggles. I love all your fics. Keep it up. |