I know its been awhile since you wrote this but its awsome, please write more i love your stories

Interesting, but there is no longer anything saying 'PHOOMP' either here or on DA.

The comic's not on Deviantart anymore, is it? It sounds like it would've been a blast.

A lovely way to connect the comics and story line. i just love that twist at the end. "I didn't pack any markers."

*grins*

Oh goodie!

I love when you have those conundrum dreams that seem to weird to be real, but then you find something that couldn't be without the dream in your surroundings.

It's fun...

I read the comics and thought them hilarious. Cafei has some nice artistic skills. :3

Excellent stories! I'll have to give a few cracks here and there at the FF writing contest, ne? Though I'll probably loose because I can never mimick anyone's characters. But I sure can try! I love all of these stories. . . and Ratchet is getting so protective of our little Evy! Thank goodness for Mirage, and how did that Magic Marker get inside of that towel, eh? It was PFM, I swear!

Brillant.

OMG, this was PERFECT! Oh, it'd be so nice for Evelyn to have another human companion, crazy though she may be. Oh, I can just think of poor Ratchet, having to deal with a crazy teenager on top of trying to keep Evey alive and well. Cue the hilarious mental images! xD

LOL..i thought this was a good story...u should make another chapter...i saw the artwork and i though that it was amazing!

Oh my goodness! I love it! Evelyn's slowly going crazy, you know. _ And it's awesomely fun, especially having read the fancomics. Her explanations to Ratchet are hilarious!

Artemis-chan

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!

That's funny!

This could have so easily have fallen under The Care and Feeding of Humans as a sleep chapter. Poor Prowl can't even be there to defend himself. XD This is great.

Oh, this is absolutely wonderful. Cafei is such a great artist on dA, and this is so wonderfully written. I love how Ratchet is so curious at listening to Evelyn tell about her dreams, and Sideswipe is just confused.

Do they even have paper on the Metellus?

I can't wait for the next chapter on Juxaposition!

The marker?...Oh no! She's real! Everybody run!

I love those short comics. Mostly the shoe one. Can't believe Torque got it, haha! I also love Juxtaposition, I'm forcing my brother to read it.

I hope the next chapters of the main story and 'On the Care and Feeding of Humans' will come soon.

-Ka