I really love these. "sirius in azkaban" is wonderful for its rhythm and "the moon goddess to remus lupin" for its symbolism. To me, at least, the poems together are a sort of study in the nature of allure and defiance. It's really clever work.

i liked it and i didn't know you could put poems on this i'm gonna go put all mine on it seems as though everyone likes yours!!

i like your user name

not bad i can tell yu like harry potter me too i have read all the books hope you write some more

I like Harry Potter and poetry is ok. But I just want to say that you made a lot of effort to do this. Two thumbs up!!

i like them especially the moon goddess to lupin that one is pretty :) i must admit though the one for sirius is a lil hard to follow but after the second time readin it it made sense both are very good ;)
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Excellent job. Please write more! "Sirius in Azkaban" has great visuals depicting him as very malnourished but with a strong soul. Very interesting way to describe the dementors. Haunting feeling.

"Moon Goddess" has an excellent rhythm to it and a classic feel. It reminds me of some poems I read about Circe. Very feminine feel to it. Excellent!

Nice poems. "Do you have more?" I would like to read more. :)

I love these! They are both great!!!!

They were good, I prefered the second one to the first, I find it very hard to describe the moon without sounding clichéd when I do it, but you managed that well! The first one was also good, it made you really think about what Sirius suffered, I thought the "transparant skin" line was especially powerful.

is it wolfsbane? just a guess. verrrrrrrry good! btw, that's a good way to get people to review---but a riddle for them to answer.

beautiful poems, although I have no idea who you might be. Lets see, who writes about Lupin and Sirius? Um... Blaise? D.M.P? Moon?

2 absolutely beautiful poems.

no, i can't guess who you are. :) but my fav character is lupin and it's a nice piece you have about him right there.

really great! great rythym and everything, could be songs if they were longer, hmm...

You really are a talented writer...wow...these are excellent!