I love your story, it isn't long, but it has everything a good story need.

AW!! so sad, but good at the same time.

aww poor zuko
it's really sad for zuko
but things can change for him

good story

dude, nice segue into greif and conflict. is this a one shot or a possible opening to a wonder Zutara fanfic?

love the story hope to red more!
i wonder what will happen next. i can't wait.
well done!

write more! it's so good! i love it!

That was excellent...great start! I can't wait for the next chapter...please--please update soon.