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| Mrs. Strife 2007-11-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseI didn't like it at all :/ |
| SagaLight 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abuseWHAT?! T_T Dun ever write anything that sad again. Have you ever went into a stage of depression because you're reading a sad part in a book, but you have to go on through the day. Well it's like that. I'm gonna go emo if I have to read anything this sad again @_@. Please dun. >.> One time i read one about namine having cancer, dying, and roxas had asthma so he had a asthma attack when he saw her die, he coulda took his inhaler, but he didnt and he died. @_@ I know aerith really does die but this is just painful. At least you could focus your sadness and anger on something (coughcoughsephirothcoughcough) >.< If she really died like that then cloud would take one more step towards emo and start cutting himself. (He was already being depressed, and withdrawn wearing black) >.> Though your writing is very effective, and it takes skillfullness to write this >.> XD Like I say to a lot of authors I like... (dun take this too seriously) I LOVE YOU! .> o_o" ^.^ Keep writing! |
| mystic-Hoshi 2007-09-15 ch 1, | abuseoh my...that was very unexpected. it's sad, but it's good. is that weird? but i dont think it's their ending. well..at least she was optimistic about it. i hope Cloud'll be okay though. |
| Chicken Pride 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseWow O_O That was really good!! But... sad ;_; |
| Aizawa Mika 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseomg that was so sad =/ |
| sesamestreetkid 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseWHA. o.O She died! Ha. Sorry, I'm slow. I had to reread it two times just to finally realize she was dead. Good story though. Had no idea that was coming. |
| Seizalyn 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseHi, Lynn here from CxA! *waves* I read some of the forum reactions to your fic, so I knew I was in for a sad ending... but this is just, hmm. Oh, it's VERY good, I assure you. So good that I was left speechless (and reviewless!) for a while! Upon first reading, I felt left with the very same coldness that I think Cloud must have felt. It's such a sad twist, but perhaps even more startling is how you simply ended it with Aerith's final words. I had to re-read the whole thing with a clearer mind to really understand. Combined together, they're a one-two punch straight to the stomach that left me stunned. So Aerith was... 'training' Cloud, in a way. Wow. Great fic for "Proposal". I hope you're doing some other themes too! I'd love to read anything else you have! |
| trankwility- 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseoh my gosh... =( poor cloud. I didn't expect aerith to die :O i like the note she wrote him, don't know why =P |
| Beeria(to lazy to login) 2007-08-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseBut...BUT...NO! *dies from sadness* Man what a twist! ~Beeria |
| Peanuckle 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abuseOh wow... that really sucks. Great plot twist, great story. I'm gonna go cut myself to make the sadness go away now :( |