 LocoHelli 2008-11-01 . chapter 5I want to read more O_O |
 trish01chiu 2008-09-24 . chapter 5i love it...!! cant wait for the next chapter!
yayzyayz! thank you very much xD |
 lamatikah 2008-09-23 . chapter 5LOL REVIEW.
I gave you a running commentary.
You don't need a review from little old MOI. |
 trish01chiu 2008-09-22 . chapter 4waa! wait.. did something happened to Yuffie and Axel?!
Poor Roxas... this is making me cry...!
aw... curse you axel! just kidding... D:!
aw huhuhuh... T_T |
 Peachi Bunni 2008-09-01 . chapter 4Oh wow. Could the world be any MORE cruel to Rox?
Can't wait for the next chapter! |
 The Odd Dreamer 2008-08-07 . chapter 4Since the premises is currently infested with relatives, I had to tone down my squeal of joy at this story being updated.
Poor Axel, definitely not a pleasant memory. I can't wait to see how things will go from here.
I don't really like pointing out mistakes, but hadn't Axel met Yuffie when she was Roxas' boss back in 'Fire'? Other than that everything is fine.
Anyway, really glad you updated this story.
Keep up the good work! |
 lamatikah 2008-08-06 . chapter 4Lol. Dirty, stupid, cheating Axel.
-tuts-
reimei xx |
 The Odd Dreamer 2008-05-17 . chapter 3Seriously, why did it take me this long to review this story? I first read it back in like September!
Anyway...
*Ahem*
No...!
Axel isn't gone forever! That's like his niece or something. Even if it is his kid there's still a chance, don't give up Roxas!
I really can't wait to hear Axel's side of the story. After that we get closer to the part where him and Roxas start to get back together!
Geez, I'm sounding like an obsessive fangirl.
Anyway, keep up the good work! |
 Gone Forever 101 2007-11-17 . chapter 3NONONO! I wasn't expecting that at all!
Gah! curse you! You made me cry! |
 Krstee 2007-09-02 . chapter 3Oh jeeze oh jeeze.
I don't even know where to start with this.
Well, I started reading fire today, and haven't been able to stop reading. I must say, you are an incredible author, your story is astonishingly captivating, and so incredibly emotional.
Oh jeeze. You don't even know how nervous I am right now. Please, please, please update soon! I really think I might explode if forced to wait too long.
Awh jeeze. I feel so sorry for Roxas and Axel! Fire ended so beautifully, and I was certainly hoping that the sequel would be happier. Haha, but I suppose that's just how life goes. While love is absolutely incredible, one must be willing to accept the challenges as they come with it.
I just hope Roxas and Axel end up together again, though!!
Once again, please update, you rock! |
 Peachi Bunni 2007-09-02 . chapter 3you made me cry! how could you do that to roxas!?! TT_TT he doesn't deserve it! he deserve sweet akuroku love!! Dx -sighs- it was a good chapter... but i feel like crying more
can't wait for the next chapter! |
 lamatikah 2007-09-02 . chapter 3I miss you so much that my "infectous giggle" is infectously giggling at any oppurtunity. IT WASN'T EVEN FUNNY AND I WAS LAUGHING. I'm even laughing at my own jokes... *shudders*
You know, I'm not crying for Roxas.
I AM CRYING FOR ME!
OH YES. YOU SAID HEV AGAIN AND I WAS THE ONE WHO TOLD YOU EVERYTHING!
*weeps*
I feel so used...
lamie xx
o.~
PS. You're no longer my friend, you user! |
 lamatikah 2007-09-02 . chapter 2Which friend?!
I might know 'em!
And excuse me, dedicated to HEV?!
When I was the one who had the plot ideas (again - ha! like story, like sequel... i'm way too hyper, i just sat there and did my "infectuous giggle" - you know the one - for about ten minutes) and i haven't seen my name mentioned ANYWHERES!!
*der shocke*
lamie xx
o.~
PS. i still prefer french, it's just shocke sounds german |
 Peachi Bunni 2007-09-02 . chapter 2demykins i love you! you mullhawked singer of a man! xD
off to read more!! |
 Crazydrawinggirl 2007-08-28 . chapter 3-Cries with Roxas-
wow! That was so sad! Please update soon! |