nice

this was really well done. I felt you captured Aly almost perfectly. i've always wanted to see her calling herself Aly Cooper

Cute. But I think maybe you should have expanded it a little? Seemed kind of...blunt, if that's the word

hmm not sure what the point or the plot are but very cute.

I must say I liked it very much, I find that Alanna is the hardest to write, but you did it well

Sorry it took me so long to review... I was gone for ten days. I like the start of this. I'm intrigued. Write more please!

-MaroonPhantom

Hm...it was cute--really sweet. The end seemed a touch un-Alanna, but it was, again, really sweet.

I liked it, and I think it fits, but I don't understand the "Daughter, mine." phrase. Daughter I could see, but I can't understand why she said mine.