as much as i hate to admit it agree with this:

"But every girl wants a Prince Charming to help her when she's hurting, to protect her when she's in trouble, to honor her as his only lady and to love her through the good times and the bad. What you associated with weakness now fulfills your life; now completes you. And even though you are far from a damsel-in-distress, James became the Prince Charming you never even wanted and gave you a happily ever after you never dreamed possible."

lovely story, btw:)

nice move potter!

Aw that's so sweet, and true, you never openly admit you want that prince charming, 'cos he'll never really be there, you think

Just gorgeous.

Charity

aw i love it:) its so sweet and sad and fluffy all at the same time

I wish i could write like this...very nice concept and amazing flow.

Very sweet!

Completely adorable ]

Love, QE

Great narrative and quite an accomplishment with the dialogue, impressive interactions and characterization.

Aw, that was just the right mixture of sadness and fluffiness! I like your idea that because Lily wasn't looking for someone to be her Prince Charming, that it made her more likely to find one. Great job!

wow, that was really, really, REALLY good. i loved it.

aw!

Its amazing! its a little fluffy but not too fluffy! Tis awesome! and i think i'm the first reviewer!