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| LY00 2008-05-25 ch 1,  | abuseLovely story. You write Jack's emotions really well and I love how you wrote Sara. This seems like a very plausible situation, and I think it's exactly how they'd both react. Thanks for writing. |
| Alison May 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was absolutely beautiful. Wonderful job. |
| Beatrice Otter 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very good look at a part of Jack's life we rarely see much about. Good characterization of both, as well. |
| densie 2007-10-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseI saw this on stargateficrec i like it. I like fic that doesn't turn sara into an evil witch. I love the adult nature of their breakup and the fact that they can still be friends. thanks for this rare treat |
| slamaina 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseThis was such a well written story. Excellent. Slam |
| trecebo 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseGood. I like that you covered this aspect of Jack and Sara. It was done very well, tactfully, even beautifully handled. |
| Lenayvonne 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuse"But now at last she realised there was nothing to be rebuilt. Only debris to be cleared out of the way." Now that is just a beautiful thought! Wonderful job. |
| Psychee 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseIn the first season of SG1, Jack appeared to still be very much in love with Sara. I have always enjoyed plausible stories that got them together (even if they would be AU, stories which I seldom read as I am a bit of a canon stickler). This was a wonderful story that doesn't violate known canon and has the potential of Jack and Sara having a future. Needless to say, I loved it. Thank you for the enjoyment I derived from the reading of this story. You write very well. (Another type of story I really enjoy is a well done Jack-clone story. So I am off to praise another story of yours) |
| DeengoBlue 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseI've always been curious about a follow up for Sara & Jack (while at the same time rather grateful that the actual show's writers never chanced to come up with something stupid and awful). You did a marvelous job, least of all in your decision of what to paint in broad stroke and in fine detail. One of my favorites (for reasons I can't quite explain) is when Jack's explaining his theory of how he got his second star. |
| gatefan-in-tx 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this. I needed to read stories about Jack in Washington and this hit the spot. I could feel his lonliness. You are very talented. |
| sophiedb 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseLove it :) |
| katejones2005 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseaw YAY that's nice! loved it! |
| Lisette 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was wonderful - truly wonderful. What a fun perspective to see season 9 Jack - and what could pass as season 10 as well. He became so far removed from the show that it was sometimes hard to see that jittery, always-on-the-go colonel in the white-haired, little more rounded general that we got snatches of later on, but here... here you've allowed us to see that despite the changes, it's still our Jack, and for that I thank you. Well done! |
| Dr. Scott 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseLovely vignette...it always felt like they needed one more scene together to really get closure. I like that she reads between the lines and sees how he's changed. Great job! |
| Roga 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseYay! Oh, this was lovely. This is canon for me. Thank you. |