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| Deandra 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseGood story! I liked Boromir being reasonable about things, and when they adequately demonstrated they were battle-ready, allowing them to continue. That is a great commander, and one who holds the hearts of his men. Well done! - Deandra |
| nautika 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is wonderful. I wonder if I've missed some other one-shots thinking they were WIPs because I thought at first that's what this was. Must check on that! Grin! I'm torn between favorite lines. "Gornir drew a deep breath and swiveled on his heels. "If you would follow me, please." He sounded like a man headed for the gallows. " or Boromir pondering the line of naked men. (Evil Grin) I love how the Lt. stood firm and really did have everything covered. And that Boromir didnt chew him out without thinking it through first and allowing him to demonstrate. Excellent! |
| Redone 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseThis summer's been very hot, and I can SO sympathise! Lovely. |
| Lord Arandur 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseSuch a cute story! I love it! It made me laugh, and it was fun to read. Great story. :) keep it up!! |
| Luthien and Tari Oronar 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseI love it! Boromir makes a wonderful Captain-General! The suspense coupled with the reason for the laughter was genius! Great fic! |