Reviews for Symphony of Change

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YoblingDramioneLover 2008-09-07 ch 9,	abuseI really enjoyed this story! Even though I'm a straight up Yoblinger, I actually liked the other ships that were included in the story. LLK, will you be writing any more Yobling fanfics in the near future? (Please say yes) :]
Adorelo 2008-08-31 ch 1,	abuseThis is to make up for the lack of critiquing and because, well, you're loved. Yes, you did have me hooked from the very first sentence. One of the first things I noticed was the use of language. I did a quick skim down to the bottom to get a feel for your combined styles and I picked out several words immediately that told me this was going to be an interesting piece to read. I also loved how I was able to work out (almost) which character it was immediately after reading the first few lines. Granted, it was nice to have it confirmed later on, but the guess allowed me to read it, but not to commit myself too much to thinking about the character. It gave more opportunity for me t focus on the language, and what was being said rather then who was saying it. Characterization was wonderful in this, and I loved the interpretation of Lindsey, especially in the first chapter; ha, reminds me of me! The hint at the blatant-sexual-tension between Warrick and Catherine was what made me want to keep reading intitally, just to see if you allowed them to move past the flirting, but I enjoyed the romantic angle throughout the story. LLK, you knwo I don't like GSR, at all, for many reasons. But I found it tolerable in this piece and I found it added, rather then took away from the overall plot line. I actually liked it's inclusion. The end was... heart clenches perfection, I have no other words. It was perfect in every way. Sigh, CW love is the best. I'll be looking out for more from you two.
bookworm86 2008-08-16 ch 9,	abuseBrilliant chapter. As usual. I laughed out loud at Catherine's concern over Warrick seeing her "without her hair all coiffed and perfect". Very funny (and believable)! The whole courthouse scene was just heart-warming. :) It's great that Lindsay finally ditched Chad, too. And it's great that she realized that she DESERVES someone who respects her ALL THE TIME. (So many people need to wake up and see that, too!) The part with Grissom was moving. I felt his pain, really, even though I wholeheartedly support Snickers. I think he "saw the light" a bit quickly and rather suddenly though, but maybe Cath is right and he really just can't stay mad at her... The hints about Nick's feelings were very well placed, too, and the dichotomy of ended-relationship/beginning-relationship and the mixed feelings it evoked gave a touch of reality to the whole thing. Or I just think so, anyway. And the last scene... too big for words. Warrick and Catherine's interactions throughout the chapter were really spot-on and the last scene was just the cherry on top of the cake. Bravo! Now I'm just curious to see how thing are on Sara's end. hint hint Oh, and the length of the chapter was just as I love it (even though, with the way my life is right now, it took me 4 days to finish reading it... :P)! Hugs and kisses to both of you!
racefh853629 2008-08-11 ch 9,	abuseAw, cute chapter! I love the ending! Great job!
happyharper13 2008-08-11 ch 9,	abuseThat was AMAZING! I love this story, and the last YoBling scene was perfect. I love the interaction between Warrick and Linds, and the family dynamic the three of them have. You definitely dealt with some major stuff for Snickers too. Sara's letter was heart wrenching. Wow. Poor Grissom. I LOVE that Greggo finally got a scene too, and was recognized as Sara's best friend. You capture the little details in life so well, and I'm still absolutely amazed by this story. Definitely worth the wait. Can't wait until the next update!
bookworm45 2008-07-26 ch 3,	abuseReally nice job. I'll come back and read the rest later. Love Warrick's fatherly attitude and the Sara triangle situation. Nice job.
happyharper13 2008-07-06 ch 8,	abuseAwesome chapter! Nice to see the developing chemistry between Nick and Sara (even though I'd prefer Sandle) The kitten is adorable. Nick sure knows how to treat a lady right. Also, I like the comment about Nick being able to make her laugh. It seems like laughter really is the best medicine for Sara right now, and Nick is best able to provide. You've subtly spelled out a very compelling argument for Snickers right here, from the way Ryan bonds with Griss and Nick, to the little touches about the living versus the dead. Nick definitely seems more prepared to deal with and understand the living than Griss. I was just confused by this one line: “Nicky you and I have to be in to work in about ten. Catherine has the evening off so it's just you, Greg, and I tonight. Can't be late.” He then vanishes into the bedroom." Is Warrick suspended or something? Awesome story! Can't wait for the next update!
happyharper13 2008-07-06 ch 7,	abuseOMG. LOVED THE YOBLING! Man, I'm jealous of their awesome first date. Warrick is such a good guy, and I hope Cath realizes soon that he won't leave her over Lindsey drama. He cares about Lindsey already so much, almost like she was his own kid, and he's clearly been a big part of improving Cath and Lindsey's relationship. Some other faves: -LOL on Period talk - the one thing guaranteed to drive guys away, or at least make them feel notably uncomfortable. -I love Nick and Warrick's secret code language. Interesting how Nick and Sara have it too, like in the last chapter when Sara was on the phone. -LLK (Since I'm assuming you wrote most of the YoBling)- I'm amused that you and racefh both referenced the wonder that is Eggplant Parm in your stories ;) -"She lets one of her fingers run up and down the back of my hand, down to my watchband before her eyes meet mine. “Nicky.”" = priceless -"Obviously, I’ve never been a teenage girl" Very amusing statement. Now I'm being very amused trying to imagine Warrick as a teenage girl. And as much as I love YoBling, I think RyanLindsey is my new favorite ship.
happyharper13 2008-07-06 ch 6,	abuseAwesome job! You're doing a really good job of drawing out the OCs. My only complaint is that you deal with all main CSI characters except Greg. A little more Greg, please?
happyharper13 2008-07-06 ch 5,	abuseThat chapter was so sweet. LOVED how Lindsey's finally on the right path. All of the Lindsey-Cath interaction was perfect, and it really showed how YoBling is so right for everyone involved. As a Greggo fan, I also loved the line, "And not a 'Greg' thirty either, a real thirty." Greg is so young at heart. Anyways, awesome chapter! You really bring out the best, fullest characters in Cath and Warrick, and even Lindsey, who barely gets a character on the show. Amazing job! Sara has such good taste! Poppies, Gilmore Girls, Wicked... (If only Greg Sanders were included in that list sigh)
happyharper13 2008-07-05 ch 4,	abusePoor Gil! This chapter makes me very sad, knowing that she's gonna end up with Nicky. He's putting his whole heart into it and doing the "most important thing" he's ever done, and you're gonna let him down?! Still, good chapter. I'm interested to see how you wind this into a Snickers. Awesome job. Very well written. Grissom seems very real. You do a really good job of differentiating characters, even in first person. Grissom in first-person feels notably different and significantly more philisophical. You definitely seem to have captured his personality, as well as his relationships at work (like the convo with Cath, though I thought the two of them were a little better about talking about personal stuff than you let on). Now on to the next chapter! I'm glad I started reading this midway, because I would not have wanted to wait for the next update ;)
happyharper13 2008-06-30 ch 3,	abuseI love the subtle nonverbal communication, how Nick always knows what's up with Warrick without speaking. It makes sense (and is enlightening for those of us still baffled by all methods of male communication XD) and sets the stage for Snickers.
happyharper13 2008-06-30 ch 2,	abuseWow. Talk about a secret past. That was really unexpected, and I can totally understand Grissom's reaction. Every character seems in-character, though I still find it hard to imagine Sara marrying that way, or being a mother, given her issues with trust, and with weddings. But awesome chapter overall. Very well-written and thought out.
YoblingDramioneLover 2008-06-17 ch 8,	abuseI love this story so much! Keep up the good the good work you two. PS: LLK, what happened to Without a Word and Elaborate Lives. Why did you take them down?
happyharper13 2008-06-10 ch 1,	abuseWhoa! Normally I'm not not a big fan first-person, but this is REALLY good, and definitely embodies everything about what makes the best first-person narratives so amazing. It's very reflective and insightful, and the language is just really really good. Variety in sentence structure, word choice, etc. This is truly a pleasure to read :) YoBling is really growing on me, and you definitely do it justice. Awesome job!

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