 Dimac99 9/1/09 . chapter 4I'm mostly depressed now because that was the last of your brilliant Mummy fics. Excellent work, loved them all, especially your Ardeth and your Jonathan :-) |
 ethiercn 2/22/04 . chapter 4 Great story with good characterization |
 AerinBrown 10/20/03 . chapter 4*sigh* I love goofy Rick. But anyway.
You write wonderfully well, and this story was no exception. I feel bad about the museum, though! That's a lot of history and etc. destroyed.
Poor Ardeth, at the end. He always seems so lonely, which makes me sad.
Keep writing! |
 Airelle Vilka 12/27/02 . chapter 4 Aww... Rick and Evy are so good together. I'm glad to read another good adventure tale about them. |
 May it be 3/31/02 . chapter 4Great story! Very well written! I just finished reading another one of your stories, and they're both FANTASTIC! I have one request though, write more to this one! I need to know what happens! Is Ardeth okay? I really like these stories that are a between movies adventure, they are great! (and of course if they've got Ardeth in them it makes them even better _)keep up the good work and keep writin!
Mornie alantie, may the light of night guide your way. |
 Caitlin 9/10/01 . chapter 1 Fantastic story! My only complaint is that there isn't more. ;-) |
 Hattie 9/4/01 . chapter 1This is a good story, I like it very much. |
 Hattie 9/4/01 . chapter 2Very good story, keep writing. I like it. |
 Shada 8/26/01 . chapter 4 What a great story! I know it ended but are you going to write some kind of continuation to it? Is Ardeth okay? :) |
 Peacockgirl 8/23/01 . chapter 4I really liked this, good writing! |
 Marcher 8/22/01 . chapter 4I'm running out of words to express how much I enjoy your stories. This was jam packed with everything, romance, excitement, action and humour. A really great story to come back to. Big smile! |
 Mojenica 8/21/01 . chapter 4This story is great. I really love it. (It is the first fic I read since FF.net came back up.) Anyway, I liked it alot, and hope to see more stories out of you soon. Because you are a kick ass writer. Lime jello! |
 ellbee 8/12/01 . chapter 4Well, this story has everything. Action, adventure, a little romance, fire, explosions, great escapes, hostage situations, secret tunnels, and Heroic Ardeth. Seriously, you've got the characters down perfectly, and I can sense the growing bond between Rick and the Carnahans, and the Med-jai. I hope there will be more in-between-the-movies adventures for our heroes. |
 Finding Beauty 8/12/01 . chapter 4Very good. Rick has to be a difficult character to write when he first realizes he's in love . . . and when he's injured. You also pulled off all the characters involved remarkably well - so few authors can master them all. I look forward to more! |
 Deana 8/11/01 . chapter 4 This story was great, I loved it! Do you have a sequel in mind, I couldn't help but notice the way it left off, lol! :) |