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| Netbug009 2008-08-14 ch 3,  | abuseI love the little "no. go to the command center" bit. You have very nice dialog. |
| Netbug009 2008-08-13 ch 2, | abuseFAUX WOOD. OH MAN. That's hilarious. XD |
| Netbug009 2008-08-13 ch 1, | abuseOoh, I like where this is going. A few typos, but we all have them. Nothing major though. Nicely written. :) |
| Neurquadic 2008-07-02 ch 6, | abuseLMAO! Oh my GAWD! EPICNESS has been put into writing! ROFL! Haha, Ratchet you sneaky glitch! :D And uh-oh, what's gonna happen now that Sideswipe's been "kidnapped" and Bluestreak's overhead?!!?!?! Oh man, I can't wait for the next chapter! Great job! :heart: |
| Shadow Wolf 359 2008-06-26 ch 5, | abuse"Optimus Prime’s voice sounded like a mix between a badass superhero, that announcer guy and God." Best. Line. Ever. Seriously. I still can't stop laughing. Because it's so true. Thank you, thank you, thank you. |
| Anonymous Reviewer 2008-06-21 ch 6, anon. | abuseHi! I've been following this story for a while, and it's great that you've finally updated! I love the way you portray the character's thoughts, Sideswipe's especially. Poor guy, he just has no dignity left, does he? But, I can't say he didn't deserve it. Sunstreaker too, although he doesn't appear in this chapter. I love how Snarl is taking art lessons from Sunny too. That was halarious! It kinda reminds me of your other story "Is it a Shindig or a Hootenanny?" (Great story, by the way.)Prowl cracking up was halarious, as well as Jazz's and Brawn's reactions to it: totally freaked out! That part had me in stitches. I can't wait to see how this whole mess resolves itself. Keep 'em coming! I look forward to the next chapter! |
| Anime Alex36 2008-06-16 ch 6, | abuse*hyperventalates from laughing* Yay for Dinobots and misinterpreting datsuns! |
| Trapped in Reality 2008-06-16 ch 6, | abuseThis was so funny to read! I loved it! I love Ratchet's revenge, Prowl laughing and freaking Jazz out, and Snarl "kidnapping" Sideswipe! "So the two acts of stupidity went their separate ways with the promise that when they collided once again, a mess of untold proportions would be released." I loved this line! What a great way to end a chapter! I've noticed a few spelling errors in your work like you put a word that's similar to the spelling to the word you wanted. I can't remember any specific times, but I would reread a confusing sentence then realize you meant something else. that's all. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| GaliStar07 2008-06-13 ch 6, | abuseLOL! Oh my gosh! It would be great if you animate some scenes from this story on deviantart! Then we would all laugh some more and applaud you for it! Yeah, hearing Prowl laughing is a bit scary...just back away slowly...and run for it! Paperweight! HA HA HA! Yeah, I can imagine little 'swipe sitting on top of a file as a paperweight with Prime placing him there! The ending was great, too! Sunny teaching a Dinobot how to draw? I loved to see that! This is great! I can't wait to see how Bluestreak telling the others about Sideswipe being botnapped! Update soon when you get the chance please! You really have a talent for both animating, drawing, and writing that makes us all hungry for more! |
| Fire From Above 2008-06-13 ch 6, | abuseDear Primus, that's going to be huge. |
| Fire From Above 2008-06-13 ch 5, | abuseBohemian Rhapsody. You are a genius. |
| Fire From Above 2008-06-13 ch 4, | abuseLove evil Ratchet. |
| Fire From Above 2008-06-13 ch 3, | abuseGiggling over here. |
| Fire From Above 2008-06-13 ch 2, | abuseThat was awesome. |
| Fire From Above 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseNice setup. |