Wow...
I'm at a loss for words. All I know is that I'm confused and have many questions that I NEED you to answer.

Wah! More! I want more!

This is such a wonderful story, I couldn't stop reading it until the end. I've never seen a style like the one you use, it's totally refreshing once I got used to it. It flows wonderfully and makes you immerssed in the characters. The sheer emotion, angst, and turmoil is so intricately felt.

Please update soon, I really can't wait for more.

-snatches 200th review- :D

I love this story! I haven't read it in a while so I decided to go back and start from the beginning...I adore your enigmatic Fate.

Please update it soon!

oh no, oh no, oh no!! chapter 7 was so short!! X_X

i was actually going to read this fic when it already finishes but my eyes just won't leave the title!! argh!! and now the cliff hanger is murdering me.. hope you'll update soon! see ya! :D

it's been a while since i've reviewed a fic.
anyway, i'm loving the angst. i was a little confused with the Alicia/HAyate scene though... filler chapter huh? hm...
But as usual, no complaints here.

uptade soon please!
-tami

Maybe is just me, or maybe I felt disappointed for the shortness of this chapter and the cold response between Fate and Nanoha. I don’t get how Fate is unable to guess what’s bothering Nanoha so much, after all she told her about her affair with Hayate-chan. Anyone would feel betrayed after hearing that.

I’ll be waiting for that revelation.

You're cruel. You're oh so very cruel.

A beautiful chapter as always. Your style is unique and beautiful - I know I repeat myself but it's the only word that can serve to describe the way you write. Words that flow and connect with one an another to form an intricate pattern that makes the reader beg for more - and it's as addicting as a drug. I hope ou're proud of yourself for it.

But I can't help but wonder: Does this reflect your inner self in any way? The turmoil, the angst, the sheer sadness and pain that is visible - so very very visible - in the script... it's heartrending.

As I said before, only one word can describe you and your writing flow: Beautiful.

Aw! I wanted more! D:
I love the angst! Lmao!
Makes the story more suspenseful :3
And I love Fate/Nanoha!
Gah! I don't like the idea of Fate with Hayate! Dx

Wow...i'm looking forward to your update (and the revelation, of course).

I don't knew what to say other then WOW! I don't really knew were your going with this story, but I like it anyway. Keep up the great work,and update when you can.

Alicia and Hayate are nice in this chapter. Also i get the feeling that Nanoha and Fate sleeping together XD

I absolutely LOVE your quotes before and after the story its simply amazing =D but on another thought, YOUR UPDATES ARE LATE! kidding ^^ its still worth the wait XD and its amazing as always, and when schools done for you im pretty sure a lot of people will be wanting you to update more =P but the story is still going strong so I'll wait till the next update however long that might take >.> but I'll wait 'cause its too good to pass up ^^. Good luck on your exams as well, if you havn't done them already ^^. Later.

aww man..this is so...*sigh* now that i caught up to the current chapter...i wish i didnt...cos now i have to wait for the next chapter... :(

urgh...ok, i think i got the situation down...maybe

I don't know what to say. My mind was blown away. The emotions in this is just so raw. I liked it a lot. Your writing is also amazing, I real was able to understand, feel, what the character was going through. *two thumbs up* :)