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Hi,
das ist ein super prolog. Könntest du bitte weiter schreiben, denn es ist ein spitzen Idee.

Mit freundlichen Grüßen
dein sehr begeisterter Iron

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Good story, I would like to read how Harry finally gets rid of Voldemort. The concept of a wand able to manipulate time needs some further explanation. Your initial story could also lead to a series of one shots picturing several single incidents during Harry's different lifes without the obvious drawback of just retelling the canon books.

Hell yes Soma, you are the greatest.
Harry Potter meets Sands of Time. Interesting. It felt more like a Higurashi vibe.

MORE!

I would like to see more of this one...
please continue...
thank you

good idea updates plox?

This is awesome.

An interesting prologue. I hope you find the time to expand on the story. I've red the RSeries and so far i loved them though i haven't reviewed. I agree with you that Harry Potter and the Nightmares of Futures Past being one of the best stories out there. Keep up the good work.

I think that after citadel you should continue with this. It is a very good opening and has a imaginative plot. i really like it.

*makes mental note to check on S'TarKan*

for a 'rip' off of pince of persia: sands of time. it looks pretty good.
and the best part is that harry doenst look sane!! oh sure, he could probably pull of the act of looking sane, but from that thoghts we see in this prologue we can clearly see that he went insane a long time ago from so many reruns

that and the whole "I control time" thing when hes trying to find a way to get out of the loop *sniggers* ill say that it has me hooked thats for sure.
what would it take to entice the plot bunny for this idea to come back?

Interesting concept, but it would be entirely too easy to fall into the numerous cliches that exist nowadays. I would enjoy another chapter or two to see exactly where you go with this.

I am hooked up on this one. There are a lot of redo fics out there, but most of them just copy too much from canon or they are so overladen with romance that it is sickening. I'd like to see you creating something original and hopefully humorous. Please discontinue this one, without him being angsty or/and fawning over some 11 year old kids.

Wow, this is a really cool idea! It's hard to come up with something unique in our fav types of fanfics, such as time travel. Major kudos for being original and interesting. I hope you continue. The prologue has me hooked! Thanx for writing. Laters! ^_^

-IJedi

wow! this has some great potential!

This is really, really good. You've got my attention. I want to see more now. I'm a big fan of well-done time-travel stories (not to mention I write some pretty complex ones myself).