great story! can't wait to read more!

hi!!i'm new!!i just read the 8 chapters!they're awesome!can't wait to read more!i'm gonna thanks karla for telling me about this fic...(a few seconds laters) there, i thanked her (i'm chatting with her right now. i can't believe what grissom said!if i were sara, i would have punched him in the face (just kidding) but i defenitly would have brouth LH to the conversation...but i think that would probably made the things worse...well, that's it, see ya in next chapter!bye!

good job.. keep going...

great chapter i love insicure grissom for some reason.please update soon.

wow keep this up its brill

AH! Angst!! But as always very good and in character. Please say there will be some fluff coming up. :)

Great chapter.

That was a stupid thing to do Grissom.

hey just got around to reading this chapter and i loved it,damned interuptions i dnt like that other guy, and the ending was quite tense. please update soon,looking forward.

Good thing he held his jealousy.Not a good thing to show in the lab.

That damn Lachlan is right. Great fic so far. Keep going! :-)

OMG I need more! This chapter was good. Eric is an **. Couldn't he see that obviously shes with Grissom? How stupid can this guy be? w/e awesome chapter anyways. Write more pretty please. :)

i love the way you write a jealous grissom. its great, cant wait for the next chapter!! =)

Great chapter! Damn that Eric. lol

Amazing! I love the line where Grissom asks Sara what shes trying to say by giving him fruit. Keep up the great work, and I can't wait for the next chapter!