 annab1989 2/23/04 . chapter 1Oh...wow. I love this story. Particularly the end. Made me cry! |
 lady rosethorn 7/21/02 . chapter 1 i think i got a little teary eyed on that one. sniff. what can I say? very sweet, sad. |
 Nomad1 12/2/01 . chapter 1Oh, wow. Truly haunting. And interesting, I think, to give Josh a little bit more of a reason (however unjustified) for feeling so guilty about Joanie's death. You have to write more Josh! |
 Verdandi 8/21/01 . chapter 1From a f. hornist herself, this was beautiful. |
 Eolivet 8/21/01 . chapter 1 Ooh, very nice - a sweet and sad story. We've never found out how Josh's sister died, have we? Great introspection - would love to see a follow up after the shooting. Keep writing! |