I kind of liked this one!

If you ever think about a sequel, I say: do not hesitate!
(I say a sequel, because this story is good as it is now, and I would prefer you exploring what consequences there would be in one or two other one-shots than expending this one.)

Again, good work!

INTERESTING. I like the Nabiki perspective. Don't get to see it very often. I always thought there was a softer side to her. Nice work by the way. Gonna check out your other stories now. Oh yeah, was the answer to the quiz...Bladerunner?!

Very nice little story. Stands on its own, yet seems to have an opening or three for a continuance of some kind. Keep up the good work!

This was written really well, but it really didn't make much sense. Did Mr. Tendo hit Nabiki? Why was Ranma crying? It was really good, but just didn't make sense.

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I loved it, and I'd love to see more fics fromyou. Keep on writing, can't wait for your next one.

It's a nice, short story - a short, rare interaction of such between Ranma and Nabiki. ^^ Grammatically, there's not much to say because it's all fine, but you could group some of the sentences together.

As for Ranma around the end of the story, I didn't quite understand what Ranma meant when she said "same as usual," especially the part where he cried. Perhaps it's something related to Ryouga sleeping with Akane based on this story. ^^

Well, anyway, that's about it. Good work. ^^

I must say well done, a chapter that can stand as a one-shot if need be.

Nice slice of life moment in the lives of these two.

You need to write a full blown story, the talent shown here needs more of a longer outlet!

dennisud

Very nice. If you ever decide to write a series along these lines, I'm sure I'd enjoy reading it. I've put you on my author alert list, so I'll look forward to your future work.

I liked it.

Very nice and I think rather well done. As for the movie, I would guess Blade Runner. "Tears in the Rain" is the last track and, I might add, one of my favorites from Vangelis along with the Closing Credits track.