this chapter got me hooked. the ending was really nice.

same thing happens to me when i try to write up relationships, they go so fast lol. i so want to read more.

wow this was a great way to continue. i like it a lot and am very excited to continue reading.

I hope this will go on soon.
Waiting for a new chapter impatiantly.

Woo hoo! New chapters rock! Makuta making his move was cool, but I gotta say that Zaktan was a complete surprise! I wounder if he's still working for TSO or some other new player. Looking forward to the next chapter as always! Keep up the good work!

~Hahli33

YAY! :D AN UPDATE! It was great. :)

Who's Pohatu getting paired up with?

The Piraka tht spoke was Zaktan, right?

Gasp? GD is not dead? REJOICE! :D

And yes, hurray for plot! XD

So hm, Lehu is getting a crush on someone? Naughty. But yeah. I wanna know more about Lewa's dreams. Sounds interesting.

And three pronged blade? Is that Zaktan I am sensing?! I hope it is. Zaktan is cooler than he should be D: And damn you, you left me with a cliffhanger! Argh. Cliffhangers are torture for me, I have to know what's gonna happen next! XD

Anyway, glad to see you (FINALLY) updated! I love this story, despite the slash. See what you've done to me! *wails* XD Great job, and I realy wanna know what happens next, so hurry and update soon, yes? 8D

That one line of Pohatu's absolutely cracked me up - making out on the first date and it hasn't even ended...LOL. That totally is something Pohatu would say XD

Gah! Why must you leave us hanging on for more?! Write more! More, I say!

So, Onua's remembering something? Or having visions? I wonder how this is gonna turn out...

Keep writing! This story's got too much potential for you to not update! *puppy eyes*

...Wow...
I loved it. The describtions were perfect and absolutly fitting. But why do Makuta and Onua get along?
Anyway, i really hope you can get the next chapter up in the holidays, i cant wait!

Baby Tahu!


lolz ^_^ Well, i'm gonna go bask in the glory that is System of A Down. ttyl! Can't wait for the next chapter!

~Arya

Interesting...really confusing but good. I would like to see where this is going so please update fast.

Yay! You finally got this up, I'm so proud of you! ^_^ But it's so damned confusing... >_< PLease get the next part up soon! ^_^ And give us a little sneek peak at the other pairings? *Puppy dog eyes*