i sure want more ;_;

How horrible! How could you do that to Cloud? Was he still barely alive when Zack got him out of the tank or was that wishful thinking? Was he ever aware of the fact that his best friend had left him to die?

that was really good and as much as i like this story i think you should end it there.

~Sabith

That was cute, poor Cloud, Zack really needs to be more observant... I hope to see more of this story in the future. Great Job.

this has got to be some of the best writing i've seen! this is positivley marvelous!! yes i do want more!

Oh more please, this one's so interesting!

(chuckles)

Zack's gone and burried Cloud and then walked away? Of course I want more! :D Cloud waking up in that shallow grave would be pretty sweet..
Very sad chapter. Took me a little while to remember what was happening, but very good.

Ohh, angst!

Poor Cloud.. I wonder if he rememberes Zack leaving him. Hell, assuming he has any form of sentience left..

wow this is really good hope u continue

that was really really cute, i absolutly loved it! the fact that it was zack was really unexpected, excelent writing. id live to read more stories like this from you.

~Sabith