Wow, that was a wonderful prologue. I admit it would have been better if you got an interview from every member of Nemesis, but this is fine. I like the last segment in especially. I have always been a fan of circular progression, and this just goes to show how effective it is. I feel that this is potentially one of the best fanfics/series of fanfics that I have ever read. I find it ironic that Ranma caused her own "birth" so to speak, well actually, both of them caused it, now that I think about it. Ah, the irony is mind numbing. Ranma-kun, who originally hated and thrust away his curse, actually ended up causing it. I guess this would be a causality loop.

That's so remenicent of Ryouga that I just can't stop laughing. And in the last chapter you mentioned that you thought you should quit? Fuzakeruna yo!

The hell are you throwing at me? What's with this defeatist **? I LOVE your writing, and trust me, if I didn't I wouldn't be reading it! Always write from your heart and the readers will always love it. That's what a wise writer once told me, and it's always rung true for me so far. I'll be damned before I let someone else become depressed when they do such excellent work. You better not give up, or "In the name of the moon, I'll punish you!"

A pretty good story, though the ending could've been a bit more fleshed out...
Anyways, great

I'm glad you found my review of the previous story to be helpful. I hope to add to it here. Your sentence structure has improved a bit, but pacing is still a problem. If you read through it and compare you some other stories you might notice that yours feels a bit...rushed. That's mostly the result of not breaking up dialogue like I said in my last review.

I think that your biggest problem once you fix those will be detailing your work. It's like painting a house: you do the big stuff before the trim, but for you the trim is just the same color as the walls. Take a bit more time once you're satisfied with how the chapter or story reads as a whole then go back and add some details. You might find that it derails the story a little so you have to be careful, but it's very rewarding and allows you to fill out your world.

A fine ending.

Great ending to a great story! Good job!

That was a nice little capstone. thansk for adding it.

And you say there's more Baba Yaga's curse coming? Woo hoo! I've been looking forwars to a BYC update for a long time. I will definitely read it.

Great story. BUT WHAT HAPPENED!?!? Will there be other stories?

Excellent ending I think. Good job.

great chapter

I like how Team Nemesis is based on Earth, very nice. But I don't like how they just warped in and blasted Galaxia, I would have liked to see Ranma fight her one on one.

Neat story. Wonder what the fallout for their actions will be like for the Senshi and the aftermath of battle.

i really like this story.
when you do make the epilogue please do not try to drag it out to make another story of it. i think it kills a story to do that.

Excellent update as always! Keep up the great work!