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Amity Bell
2009-03-24 . chapter 1
That was beautiful. ; ; I think you did a good job keeping the characters to their normal behavior, and I love stories like this that look deeper.
Lady Chekov
2008-09-06 . chapter 1
Simply beautiful.

Thank you.
Matteic
2008-08-31 . chapter 1
You write really well.
airmac
2008-08-13 . chapter 1
I like all of your stories, but this one is probably my favorite. It has everything: humor, friendship, angst, and the point that we had to treasure the present and our parents and people we love, and not run for something we think that we want.
I’m rambling, sorry, but I really like it very much!
Elithraniel
2008-01-26 . chapter 1
This is a wonderful story, very well done.
AJ
2007-11-27 . chapter 1
I am a fan of your longer fic that you have posted here, and in it, I love your characterization of Chase especially. In this one, the relationship that you describe between him and Foreman is so tentative, and yet it really works well. It is nice to see Chase as someone other than the pretty, girl-crazy Aussie with no soul and Foreman as something other than the sanctimonious brat that he has evolved into. Plus, I love Mom and Dad Foreman. Well written and a beautiful idea for a little glimpse into the bittersweet world that is Alzheimer's
Dybdahl
2007-11-12 . chapter 1
It's nice and bondig...ly?
Padawan Jan-AQ
2007-10-30 . chapter 1
Fantastic story, the kind that just make you feel good for the rest of the day. Thank you for sharing it!
mindreader208
2007-08-29 . chapter 1
Aw, that was so sweet! I know this review is painfully short, but I want you to know I'm also keeping up with your other story. It's been so long since I've logged into my account for this and that reasons, but you're an amazing author, and I love how you describe my favorite character -Chase- as someone more than a two faced jerk as so many people wrongfully make him out to be. Let's pray the new season of House will bring more justice to his character, ya?

Kudos, my friend. ^^

~*~mindreader208
Nina
2007-08-28 . chapter 1
Gorgeous. Just gorgeous! *claps*
JennifferButterfly
2007-08-28 . chapter 1
Superior in all aspects. A truly enjoyable read.
SarahWRadcliffe
2007-08-28 . chapter 1
this is one of the most beautiful stories i have read. i cried and i think that many people that have a friend or a family member that is sick acts just like Foreman and many dont have friends like Chase to make them see the error of their ways.

Beautiful story,
fluffy2001
2007-08-28 . chapter 1
I finally got around to reading this. I took it to work yesterday, but that entire busy thing happened.

Anyway, I loved seeing you write something like this! The show really missed an opportunity for Foreman to confront his embarrassment over his family situation. I like how you portrayed it here, and it's fitting that Chase was the one to give Foreman the kick in the rear he deserved. Your dialogue was especially superb with Foreman's mother. You got the Alzheimer's confusion down perfect, as well as Chase's answers.
Firetop
2007-08-27 . chapter 1
that was one of the sweetest things I've read.
opals
2007-08-27 . chapter 1
Great story. I love those rare moments when it seems like Chase and Foreman are almost friends and you've really captured that here.

Also, wonderful job of handling Foreman's parents and his mother in particular, since writing a character with Alzheimers had to have been a challenge.
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