you don't suck! this was cute, it had SasuNaru w/o it being over powering. I think this is how Sakura does feel about the team.

This was very nice. Looks like Sakura is the "mommy".

... :D

(best review, ever, right?)

It's cute. ^^ I like it. :P

i love how you portray sakura here. Very mature :D

Nah! You don't suck, silly!
That was really cute. I'm a sucker for Sakura p.o.v. on SasuNaru!

Most of what you've written here is exactly how I see Sakura. They're messy and sloppy and pretty effed up in the head but they're HERS and she loves them more than anything in the world. This Sakura you wrote was the one that swore never to be useless again, that stopped Sasuke from killing for her in the forest of death and begged Naruto to stop against Orochimaru.

:)

I thought it was good!
You dont suck at all! It had a lot of really good thoughts.
And I liked the way you wrote it!
Im working on a story now, and I wish I could get my writing to sound somewhat as deep as this.
Good job!

Lovely! Very very nice. Sakura fits that role better then the one she tried so hard to have. You captured them perfectly, especially Sakura.

Good job and I'm so adding this to my favorites.

Some really nice moments in this and the ending was very sweet. :) Awesome job!