wow. this is the only one i've seen where they've been brother and sister. cool, but really sad

Sad! I like the brother/sister idea. Even though he's evil, I can't bear the thought of Dark Ace dying. I'd probably cry if even Snipe died! I'm just so attatched to everybody! (sobs)

Awesome story. Cyclonis is very anst here, but for a good reason. I kinda liked the idea of them being brother and sister, and it'd be cool if you could do it again.

^sniffles^ Well written and wonderfully emotional.
Never thought of 'em being siblings before. . . It's an interesting concept.

Wow. Just... wow. This is REALLY cute. Nice, and sad. It made my heart lurch. Just... wow.

By the way, where was that picture, again?

And, for emphasis: Wow.

Awesome. Ever since the first episode I've believed they were brother and sister. Such unquestionable loyalty. I could totally believe he would die from her, but if he wasn't her brother I doubt she would care. Maybe she would feel disapointed that she lost her more competant servant... but if he was her brother I think she'd go completely bonkers with grief.

And can you point me in the direction of the DA pic?

TTNR.

pretty good...how about a sequel?

O! luv it!!
I like the siblig idea. Never thought of it dat way...Anywho, are you going to make more chapters?