i adored this little story. it's message sort of reverberated within me as i read it. i've had a rather awful couple days, but this reminded me of what i still have left and it gave me hope. so...thank you.

Wow. This is really sad but really good. I love the way that you write about responsibility and growing up, and the quotes at the beginnings of the chapters add a lot to it. I also really like the implication of hope at the end, like maybe she'll be willing to see him in the future. Awesome.

This was a very sweet story. You have done a fantastic job.

I really enjoyed this. I thought you had a really deft handling of the characters through some complicated situations. I really think you caught some great things about the essense of Sokka's character, especially as related to Katara, and I really like the way that you portrayed her as well-as a strong person who has to choose whether or not it's worth it to keep being strong or if she can just let go. I like how you brought her back around at the end. I'm very glad you wrote this story, and that I had a chance to read it.

Very well written, and I think I would put forth a hypothesis why you havent gotten that many reviews...YET.

Because it was kinda short. And, if you're like me, who searches for long stories with over 30,0 words, you would miss out on reading a great story like this one.

On a whole, I truly enjoyed this story. However, there was no real conclusion as to why Katara started avoiding Zuko, and that somewhat ruined the ending for me.

Despite that, this was very well written and was a good read.

Yay She is better! I love this story! (Adds to Favorites) :)

Kiera

awesome story so far! love the way you've portrayed the relationship

between sokka and katara! look forward to reading more

This is a really interesting story. I love how you've built Sokka. I hope we find out the reasons behind Katara's bahavior, as she seems very unlike herself. I suppose this has something to do with her sickness, but I hope there is more coming out of that.

Keep it up! I can't wait for more!

very interesting. I think you have the sokka/katara relationship spot on.

This is going on my alert! I love the tale you're beginning to weave.

The promise this shows is huge.

Keep it up!

-Kate

Very well done! The emotion was portrayed wonderfully and the language choice was great!

Nice work!

-Kate

Oh, that was sad. Poor Sokka, I guess when their father dies, he will become chief, ne?

I liked the implied Zutarar XD and how you depicted the close bond between brother and sister.

Overall, really nice job on it!

Téa