soo sad and soo beautiful at the same time.
congratulations.
it makes me cry.

aww. sad but sweet and a really good story. i luv them together and i luv how in the show josh is so cutely protective of her. and how you kinda sorta in a way used that here. :>

I love it. I'm both laughing and crying at the same time. :'D

So beautiful. *loves*

Yeah, I cried through nearly the whole thing. Awesome work.

~Victoria~

omg! that was SO good! it made me cry tho, thanx a lot! well, i absolutely luv it, but in my jandy fanfics, they're a lot more...optimistic. haha, im not very good with writing character deaths. but i luv how she dies only after marrying Josh and having Melanie 4 eleven years. its nice. :-)

good chapter