I love this story soo much...both endings. I only wish I was able to write this beautifully.

See that ending was so much sweeter but I think he should've had a girl like in the first ending lol. I really liked the fic and I think you should try writing happy endings more often. :) Like Lies, Loyalty, and Hermione Granger should have a happy ending since you won't be posting on fanfic anymore after that is done. I really enjoyed reading this fic and I LOVED how long it was, that's awesome for a oneshot to be that long. Great job! -

That's so sad! I can't believe she just died like that. I'm glad he had a baby to remind him of Hermione but that was just so depressing! I'm not quite sure why this was rated M since the sex scene wasn't graphic. Them building a house together was cute and I like the idea of the baby being born exactly where it was conceived but I wish Hermione had gotten to see her before bleeding out. I would've liked the know what the daughter was named, it be a nice little detail for me lol. One thing I don't really understand is why everyone hates both Draco and Hermione in this story. This was very sad and I hope the baby grows up happy. Magnificent job! -

I think this is a better ending than the other one. You are a great author :)

the first ending was really a sad one and this a great one :)

but i loved them both :) great job

Really, really beautiful.

A well written and in character story.

I enjoyed reading your writing, and you deserve this praise.

Hahahahaha! I sound like a prat!

But no, really, excellent job!

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loved it thank you I loved the 2nd ending best

I liked both endings...a very good story

the second ending was nice, fuzzy and warm. but i have to say, i loved the first ending, even though it completely broke my heart. XD th emotion was just powerful.

omg!

the second ending is so much better.

the first one was so depressing lol.

the second ending put me in a spectacular mood ))

This is really well written, the ended you ended with is much better. I'm the same as you a sad ending is better, it gives a sense of depths and meaning as though we're not hiding from the realities of life.

Wow the first chapter had me in tears, it was so well written I must commend you on your amazing piece of literature. When writing can envoke a strong emotion in a person, you know it's good. Great job and honestly keep writing, do whatever it takes and if this your dream follow it!

ok it's hard to decide which ending I liked more... though the happier ending is a little better since Hermione is still alive. Great story!

So I know I've already viewed but your writing is so good I thought it deserved a better review than the last one(Not that I can do a review good enough). Anyway I want to start of by saying most of the time I don't really like one shots for draco and hermione(or ginny) I find it a little unbelivable they fall in love so fast. Or they start off in love which I feel defeats the purpose. But you manage again and again to make believable, well written, and powerful one shots(and stories). Reading your stories leve me in awe of your ability to create strong remarkable characters, clever plots, and powerful language. Keep up the great work.

I really liked that ending also. Not that the first one was bad it was great i just was really sad for along time after ward and this one left me happy, well it was sorta bitter sweet butienjoyed the story alot. Wow I really botched that review. Sorry i'm running on onehour of sleep and I'm staying up late reading you work again.