Entertaining enough as usual for your writing. And I agree that the characters are seriously messed up but likable.

Gah, the favorite button being where the old review button was still gets me sometimes. Not that this is bad (quite the contrary) it's just not something I'd go that far on yet.
I liked it, you did a good job showing how messed up the whole town is and the Sawyer chapter felt accurate despite how little development she gets. In fact, I wouldn't mind seeing more on her and Shenhua. Good job on Shenhua's distinctive speech patterns by the way.
Your first chapter wasn't bad either, though if I were going to assume Revy had such a relationship with a woman, I would have leaned towards Eda since they actually hang out together (even if they're always fighting) and it'd put a different spin on the nun flirting with Rock to maker her jealous.

This sentence has a number of problems, though. "THe Yellow Flag was, as usual, a gaudy neon hole that the people of Roanapur fell into, the worst of the worst congregating there. Deviants, killers, hookers and more all gathered at the bar and tables, talking business, making arrangements or just being seen by their and occassionally nervous nods of greeting were exchanged between them and various associates, the two heading through the crowds looking for a drink."
Besides the double capital, you used the wrong there (or they're being seen by their something missing, it's hard to tell) and misspelled occasionally.

I definitely need to watch more of this series. These two chapters are very good- sex, cussing and violence, just what I like;)

And it's funny that both Rock and Light Yagami share the same voice actor. Heh.

Looking forward to more!

Wonder if Revy kept them alive long enough for Bao to get the names of their employers (so he knows where to send the repair bills)?

It was alright i guess. The bar scene did make it seem like part of the show but the rest probobly could have been beter. But thats just me.

This was cool. I wonder what Eda would think about Revy Balalaika meeting like that? Would she join in or would she condemn them for their actions.


KW

More. Black Lagoon. Yuri. *Please.* *begs on hands and knees*
I don't care who you pair up (though Balalaika roxxors. Heavily. *swoon*) just... I would really love you if you did moar T_T. So Black Lagoon yuri-starved...

you got this impression too? Though, in later episodes, it seems to me that Revvy's partner might be Shenhua or Eda...

This is a decent blend of character styles, both tough and unrevealing through and through. With the Revy and Balalaika both as you said 'strong' or 'tough' individuals, it's near ingenious using the two of them as casual sex partners.
The story seems to go on in some cases, you could 'beef' up the action and direction of the fight, probably add some weight to that scene and possibly some ectasy.
I really enjoyed this though, it is everything a 'quicky' is, it encombers both the sexual tension and mutual relationship of the two while teasing the reader into a world where anything is possible. this is a good read, i enjoyed the tension and I wasn't let down, XD

i can see it happening and i loved the bar scene. it was like watchign the show. How far into the series are you? any way later

Hello again!

I have to say that I didn't peg this as a series that you'd write. Of course, now that I think about it, there's just too much fun here! You can let loose with violence, bad words, and all sorts of naughtiness! A good release for a writer!

I admit that Revy seemed to have a straight moment with Rock in volume 2, but other than that, she's a "one of the guys" personality. Same with the Russian (as I call her). Two tough women in a tough place, what more do you need to bring them together. Now I just wonder what it would take for them to get past the "f-buddy" phase. (I try to keep some swears out of my vocab)

I also laugh at the thought of Revy and Balalaika going to the Locket. I think even Ryoko would give her some space. Although, I could see Balalaika and Integra sizing each other up! LOL

See ya next review!
writer-jm