I love it! Its wonderful! I think you're doing splendid!

Have I told you that I love you?

This was awesome. This was one of the most awesome things I've come across on this site (not that every other work of yours that I've read isn't). Your characters are completely IC, your style is very like that of DWJ, and it was FUNNY. Lovely work, going straight to my favorites.

~Avalon

Fantastic! It's so hard to find good bookverse fiction. I really love this. The only thing that made it a tad difficult was the present tense usage. I do think it would have been better written in the past tense. Still, fabulous work!

hahaha poor Michael. I really enjoyed your story :)
There aren't many (good) bookverse fanfics out there.. I hope you'll write some more.

Marvelous! I wished that DWJ had written a scene where the aunt's come knocking, hat pins in hand, and here it is. Excellent work and very creative.

Great story! I love how you showed Michael's feelings for being the scapegoat to angry aunts and mothers and the like. ^^ Very nicely done!!