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Reviews For: This Can't Be Happening

Redoren
2007-10-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseI cried! You actually made me cry! I can't believe you made me cry, and I kind of still feel like crying now. That was just like the series, making me want to rip out my heart and stamp on it for letting me get so emotionally involved.

It was good, write more :)
Stargatecrazy
2007-08-28
ch 1,
abuseLoved it! *tries not to cry* It really made me tear up! I really hope everything turns out okay like Laura dreamt it would!!

SGC
Lattelady
2007-08-28
ch 1,
abuseMajor tear jerker! But a good story and very well written. *sniff sniff*
Mariel3
2007-08-27
ch 1,
abuseOh, you made me a happy camper! I liked the premise of this and the visual of the fleet landing in a desert somewhere. The mention of panic on Eart at first made perfectly good sense, too. Laura's dreams, Bill's illness...it all worked well. At the end, I love that she dreamed he was there as the ships settled on the planet. And Bill saying, “Think of everything we’d have missed..." Ah, yes, indeed!

Thanks for the story. I really enjoyed it!
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