beautiful man.

i love how you made jack so violent :)

i have to try that sometime lmao.

You should change this from Adventure/Drama to Action/Drama. Anyway even though i didn't know who any of the characters were, this was still good and your descriptive action was just easy to see in my head; like a mini-movie.

You should definatly do more DP fics even if i never have watched the show, cuz you seem more comfortable around that area. O do one of Danny and Sam, cuz i love coupling no matter what the show.

All together this was an awesome fic.