Very bittersweet, I liked it.

God, that was absolutely heartbreaking. Excellent work.

Beautifully written! I love it! Later! XD

Beautiful...

Oh. My. God.
You were like my hero when I was obsessed with Naruto.
And now, since that obsession is over, I still love you, because you're now writing about Akuroku!

The Kingdom Hearts games are... okay.
Fun to play, 2 is the best, yadda yadda yadda.
The thing unsatisfying about them is that not a lot of romance.
Just.. killing heartless and nobodies. (The evil dudes)

I think you would like the Riku/Sora pairings.
They're very, VERY cut.
And the Cloud/Leon, and Demyx/Zexion.
Because if you like AkuRoku, I think you'd love Riku/Sora.
I expect many great KH fics form you. =]

Oh, and I loved it, by the way. Very cute and twisted and angst-filled.

;-; poor Axel...

I LOVE YOU AXEL!

This was absolutely heart-wrenching, I love how you compared the Organization XI to tinmen. It never occured to me before how similar they are. Great oneshot

wow...this was amazing. i especially loved the tin man reference (and the tin battleaxe! ^_^) and roxas does seem to be the kind of person to enjoy salinger, doesn't he?

It's been SUCH a long time since I've read a decent AkuRoku story, and this totally just completed my entire day. You, my dear woman, are amazing. Honestly, I can't find a single story of yours that I simply don't like. This is creative with a pinch of hilarity via Axel, and so much angst that it makes my heart ache.

This was lovely, the last long heart wrenching. And I think you captured both characters beautifully. Great job!

Beautiful. Though I'm generally not a fan of cultural references in fan fiction, the parallel drawn to The Wizard of Oz struck a cord. Thank you so much for sharing.

pretty good for never playing the game. i haven't either but i just lurve this pairing^^ hopfully you'll write more?

Whoa. O.O This was, like, REAllY freaking good for not having played Kingdom Hearts before. I mean AMAZINGLY good. Yah.