Great story! Not too busy and you knew when to wrap it up. Thanks!

amazing story i loved very much very beutifull romantic

Great story! I loved the heat description and mating in this chapter.

May want to set this story as "complete" I almost didn't read it since it hadn't been updated in so long.

Keep writing!

Falcon

just happened upon this and really enjoyed it. i liked your observations about alec enjoying max's atypical moments. good job with the sense of intimacy they developed so quickly. also liked alec confessing his feelings to biggs. feels right that he'd be scared to admit it to her, and need some help processing. great job!

Great story

i love it!

thats cute...real cute upsate soon

great chapter, very very good, please update soon

liked it!!

Aw! Those two are great. Umm, I want you to continue but I have no real ideas on the whole story. Maybe get her knocked up and scare her so much that she does the first thing that comes to mind...run. Hehe, I know it's cliche but I think that with your take on it, you could definitely make it original. And it'd definitely more "undiscovered" territory for them, don't you? :D

~Chica~

I never liked why they didn't explain why Max didn't have heat S2. This was sweet and made sense. Her body knew long before she admitted that Alec was right for her. :) I really enjoyed reading this story. Thanks for sharing it.

this fic is so cute, love what you've done with it! would definitely not be adverse to more, but it ends well here too

Personally I'd love to see more. Max and Alec are hot when they're both on the same page. The nuzzling was really sexy now that they've realized they're mates. But if you think you're finished with this plot I'll respect that too.

Looking forward to the next story from you, or another chapter of this fic. That would be equally awesome.

Have a happy New Year and I hope we see you post again soon.:D

-Ellie

Awesome fic!! Great job cant wait to see what you come up with next in the DA world.

Sweet ending.
Thanks for an awesome story.

Can't wait for more.