OOCness but interesting.

Thanks!

Like... One of the best-written story I've read since... forever! It's going into my favorites!

:))

So sweet...!

It's a lovely fic. I could nearly forget about what happened after dawn when L started kissing Light. Cute scene! Loving every bit of it.

I... love... you... this fic is absolutely perfect! I absolutely adore it! Beautiful! Definately going into my favs! I think it's my favorite of all your stories! It's awesome!

Amazing as the rest of them . Although this time there was some minor tense confusion and a few commas missing here and there, otherwise, kudos! n.n Heehee, now you should feel special, because I just read all of your DN stories up! MWAH- proves that I have no life, but all is fair in -mind wanders- ... L's... dead... -cries-

This is a reply to Corrupted Sanctuary - because I couldn't resist - and it's posted here due to anon posting. (Gah!)

Firstly, my gratitude at your kind words. Glad you liked. And secondly, thanks for pointing out the tense thing. An extremely bad habit of mine.. I swear it's the bane of my life! I thought I'd got rid of them all.. grr. I'll sort it now.

Oh, and glad you thought it was 'hot' -grins- Loads of people always ask me to write sex, but for some reason I shy away from the idea. As much as I'd love to, I just don't think I could pull it off - at least not in a 'tasteful' sense - I'd be terrified it would just end up dissatisfyingly PWP-ish. Maybe I'll give it a go soon.. and you can rate it for me. ;)

alex

Haha! I love it!

An interesting piece. Quite well written, aside from the odd, every now and then, changes of past-tense to present-tense wordings. Luckily, it only added to the fiction.

And I admit, the kissing scene, was acutely the only kissing scene that I can say that I was whispering, '... hot,' in my head at. Arousing? Very much so. As for L being the one to do it, and Light being unaware, very intense. I almost wished that Light would wake up and they'd have sex, because if a single, long kiss could make me feel like that, then what the hell would a sex-scene make me feel like, if you'd written it? An L and Light one to be precise.

:)

Keep up the superb writing!

C.S.

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aww omfg I must huggle the heck outta L the next time I see him x33

... aha, well, I absolutely loved reading it ;D

was soo cute, and that damn raito... :slaps 'im:

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N-Kxx

Beautiful.

i loved it :)

Depressing. That's the only word that I can say.

It suits the mood that I have right now, something dark, and a whole turmoil. You've certainly captured it very well.

It's kind of sad knowing that you can't do anything to change the story, but you've managed to make the best of it.

And L is well, a pervert, like Misa said. But a very cute one.

Random thought: If Light found out, would that increase L's chances of being killed?

woo intense. aww L -sighs-

well done :)

o, that was soo cool! yay for L!