Reviews for One Last Time - FanFiction.Net

JaydenBell 2008-01-28 ch 1,	abusethat was really great. i could totally imagine this being how it went...
truglasgowgal 2007-08-28 ch 1,	abuseI really liked this. It's funny, and it's really not at all sad until you get to the end, (well if you're like me) and you start thinking: wait, they're never going to see each other again, this is it, this is the last time they'll get to see or speak or anything to each other again - SAY SOMETHING MEANINGFUL! Lol, yeah, (but see how ENGAGED you made the reader feel? ;) ) Sorry, so at the end I was all like ... ooh, what's she gonna say, an it was sad there. But you got the perfect balance between sad and funny, well, in my opinion anyway - I'm not sure if that's what you were going for, but ... Apart from that, I loved Danny & Aiden's interaction-ing, the conversation flowed so easily, and how characters were written, and the way they spoke and how they acted - thought you got it all down to a T. Ooh, an I thought you ended it very well too, case I hadn't made that part clear :) Well done, excellent piece. Steph x
mabelreid 2007-08-27 ch 1,	abuseThis was wonderful. I could see the whole thing taking place in my head. It was great that Aiden called him on having a crush on Lindsay. It was totally sad to think that this was their last conversation together. You did a great job with this. Thanks for sharing.