This is so cute!

Aww! the end was pure fluff!

You obviously haven't read the books very carefully or studied the movies much, because there are many important details you have missed out. For a start, Harry turns 16 in this ff, but you have the date of his birthday wrong. As ANYONE who has read the series should know, his birthday is IN FACT on the 31st of JULY, not August. He is also the youngest of Ron, Hermione and himself, and Ron's birthday is during the school term after Easter some time, once again NOT IN AUGUST. Now, since Harry is 16, this would mean that this is the fifth book/movie you are writing in, which means Fred and George are yet to start their business, and no one believes that Voldemort is back. Which brings me to another point on that YOU MUST BE HAGRID BECAUSE YOU CANT SPELL V-O-L-D-E-M-O-R-T'S NAME! Pretty much EVERY SINGLE PERSON in your stories are leaning on the OC side, as I have not read Ron making ONE idiotic remark, Harry hasn't yelled ONE SINGLE WORD, Hermione isn't being a complete know-it-all, the twins haven't cracked a single joke, and THEY ALL ACCEPTED RON AND HARRY'S RELATIONSHIP LIKE IT WAS COMPLETELY NORMAL AND NOT ONE PERSON (well, save for Hermione, but that's different because she had fallen for Ron and was jealous)HAS SAID A BAD WORD AGAINST THEM! Also, I am starting to wonder if English is your first language, because there are so many grammatical and spelling errors in your stories that it almost becomes a pain to read. Ugh. PLEASE GET A BETA AND I WILL KISS THE FLOOR WHERE THEY STAND!

Dove Rymorn (Sorry for the rant but constructive criticism is just so HARD)

It's AWESOME...

When Ron and Harry confronts when they like each other, how's Hermione going to act...

BONKERS...

Hope you get more reviews...

I have to admit that I'm a little confused as to why they are adimtting they love eachother so quickly, but, nevertheless, I think this story is great so far :)

Please consider having someone edit your chapters. Your story looks promising and I look forward to reading it.

Yet, if you cannot correct your use errors, tense, and don't know the difference between your and you're (you are), your story will not likely be read.

Eh - it seemed a bit rushed for me.

I couldn't read past chapter four

This has a very promising start... i loved the banter between the two in the letters, like harry said, if it had been done in person they would both be stumbling over themselves. Off to read the next chapter!

very good so far! ill for sure keep reading!

awesome! i just finisehd it today, very cute and well simply sexy! lol

I likes it so far! im glad theres 20 chapters! i have something to read during 2nd period now after im done with my work lol ...very well written and i love harry x ron ! SO cute!

Mhm love the whole hermioneginny thing going. mixed with harryron and two of the weasly kids gay mhm fred and george are gonna take it well i bet.

Nice start to the story it'll be intresting I think ).

I stopped reading at "you was thinking of me". "was" should be "were". It was good up until I realized you had bad grammar. Please look over it again. I would definitely read it if it was edited more!

Wow! _ I love this story to much. It's so adorable and I love Ron's letter it's so sweet. I hope you write more stories.