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| ShotgunOpera 2008-07-30 ch 8, | abuseinteresting story arc...nice writing, too, i've always kinda wondered about a delinquent pony... |
| Kikomari Kuriko 2008-07-08 ch 8, anon. | abusePoor Ponyboy... But He Really Worried Darry And Sodapop So He Got What He Got [ A Big Hard Spanking]! |
| love not war 2008-06-15 ch 8, | abuseThis made me fell like I was three year old watching my bother getting spaked.I couldn't even make myself read all of it.I just read bits and peaces of the thi chapter. |
| Troyella07 2008-06-08 ch 8, | abusethat was really good! |
| animalsare4life 2008-05-22 ch 8, | abuseI would have to say ouch! For Pony!! I loved the ending!! It was cute!! ^^ |
| xemmiex 2008-03-10 ch 8, | abusewow |
| fictionlover2 2008-01-02 ch 8, | abuseis this the end of the story? |
| Write-of-Passage 2007-12-04 ch 8, | abuseWow! Loved it! Very brave of you. It was very intense just like the book. Good job! |
| jessica 2007-11-11 ch 8, anon. | abuseOMG!! I almost started crying!! please continue with this story... And if your actually reading this if you continue... Here a idea I came up with: Pony should stop getting iinto trouble... But now Soda should get into trouble like he should do some sorta drug like marajuna or suttin'. That would make an intresting story to find Soda doing drugs... :D |
| jerzgirl 2007-11-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved the story! |
| Deanaholic1 2007-10-16 ch 8, | abuseomg..i can't believe Darry..i jst can't..but it was good..really good |
| BlindedxxFalcon 2007-09-28 ch 8, | abuseMore? |
| starbryte234 2007-09-16 ch 8, | abuseThis story is absolutely AMAZING! Please, please update soon! |
| yo its Jourdan 2007-09-12 ch 8, | abuseThis story was AMAZING. I liked it alot |
| exitlight 2007-09-11 ch 8, | abuseI really liked it! |